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Comment from Katiemae1977
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Excellent haiku for nature in the city club event.
This haiku makes me kind of sad feeling a bit sorry for the poor flower.
Very effective.
Katiemae1977

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Katiemae

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Resilience is my favorite trait in a person, so then ditto for a flower. It's like that song by Aretha Franklin from the 70's "There Is a Rose in Spanish Harlem." You've done an exceptional job showing the beauty that comes from strength and tenacity. This may be my favorite one yet of all your masterpieces. xoxox

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Rachelle

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
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It is amazing how resilient nature is. To find the smallest opening and push through to continue life. You painted a beautiful image of how nature rises to the challenges. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Gretchen

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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As the flower grows in though soil, so can our lives be despite the hardships that we might face. We need to be resilient, not just survive, but to grow. Very nicely put. Thanks for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 26-Aug-2024
    My pleasure
    RL
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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It's always amazing and inspiring when we see nature's determination to survive. Perfectly expressed (of course) to provide impact and succinctness. Thank you, Gypsy. Take care, Debbie

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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It always makes me smile when I see a dandelion growing through the asphalt streets. It shows how tenacious those roots are! Great job with your haiku that perfectly describes that picture.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister

    😊 Marival ❤️
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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When I see plants, any sort of them, I am always amazed that they go above and beyond to grow where they're planted. I have often wondered why us humans struggle with that. I enjoyed reading and thank you for, again, sharing your talent with us.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
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i don't think that's a daisy lol...

still a great haiku of keeping going to get through the hard stuff!
a very hopeful haiku
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
    I was not sure about the kind of flower. I changed it to 'flower' lol. thanks!

    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy 😊
reply by shelley kaye on 24-Aug-2024
    lol! 😁✌️
Comment from Bill Schott
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This haiku, Resilience, has the proper formatting and presents the mighty daisy, which has powered itself up through man's concrete barriers and bloomed in our face.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, bill

    Gypsy 😊