Robins Come Out in Spring
The changing of winter to spring40 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I had no trouble imagining myself looking through my living room window enjoying the scenery from the warmth of my apartment.
You paint a pretty picture. I love October when the weather is perfect and the air is crisp. Karen
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I had no trouble imagining myself looking through my living room window enjoying the scenery from the warmth of my apartment.
You paint a pretty picture. I love October when the weather is perfect and the air is crisp. Karen
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
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:-)
Comment from Willie P. Smith
I enjoyed reading this poem. Your rhyming was great, and your picture selection fit your poem perfectly. The story was good and easy to read. I have only one question, did you mean to say mold instead of molt in the first stanza, last word?
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed reading this poem. Your rhyming was great, and your picture selection fit your poem perfectly. The story was good and easy to read. I have only one question, did you mean to say mold instead of molt in the first stanza, last word?
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for the extra star and for your delightful comments. I could not use mold for molt because they have two different meanings. Are used mould instead. Thank you for the suggestion
I couldn't use mold because mold and moltmeans to different things
Comment from rspoet
Hello Pam,
This is an excellent poem of the seasons
with very good rhymes, both internal and external.
The descriptive imagery works well, I like all the seasons
except for winter. The older I get the less I like snow, ice and cold.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Hello Pam,
This is an excellent poem of the seasons
with very good rhymes, both internal and external.
The descriptive imagery works well, I like all the seasons
except for winter. The older I get the less I like snow, ice and cold.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Colorado Owl
Your poem does a very job of bringing describing the shifting seasons, and the message that each season has its own rewards. Enjoy each moment. Thank you.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Your poem does a very job of bringing describing the shifting seasons, and the message that each season has its own rewards. Enjoy each moment. Thank you.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely seasonal poem with great meter and rhyme! I'm glad that you are skipping ahead to spring as autumn is encroaching in the northern hemisphere.
Hope your surgery went well and that you are recovering quickly!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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A lovely seasonal poem with great meter and rhyme! I'm glad that you are skipping ahead to spring as autumn is encroaching in the northern hemisphere.
Hope your surgery went well and that you are recovering quickly!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Robins Come Out in Spring, presented with seven AABB-rhymed quatrains, hails the coming spring that allows for life to return and those chirping birds to come back.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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This poem, Robins Come Out in Spring, presented with seven AABB-rhymed quatrains, hails the coming spring that allows for life to return and those chirping birds to come back.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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You summed it up very well Bill thank you for your review
Comment from bob cullen
A really delightful poem. I do however offer a minor suggestion. Please feel free to discard. Suggestion. First verse, line four. 'As the leaves digest into rot as they mould.' Maintains the rhyme and meter, 'cold and mould.'
Hope this doesn't offend.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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A really delightful poem. I do however offer a minor suggestion. Please feel free to discard. Suggestion. First verse, line four. 'As the leaves digest into rot as they mould.' Maintains the rhyme and meter, 'cold and mould.'
Hope this doesn't offend.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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hi Bob. No it doesn't offend at all. It's actually a good suggestion. Somebody had suggested mold, but that didn't fit but Mould does. Thanks
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I should give you a six star rating
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Pam,
This is a wonderful and uplifting poem for me!
I dread everything about winter, except for Christmas and the Super Bowl.
The way you transition to spring is the way that time is: growth at first slow, but steady.
Exceptional poem, Pam.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Pam,
This is a wonderful and uplifting poem for me!
I dread everything about winter, except for Christmas and the Super Bowl.
The way you transition to spring is the way that time is: growth at first slow, but steady.
Exceptional poem, Pam.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and your excellent rating
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You're welcome, Pam!
Comment from QC Poet
This poem achieves a traditional winter changing to spring capturing many different elements seen during the transition Thanks for sharing your poem and capturing the change of environment
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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This poem achieves a traditional winter changing to spring capturing many different elements seen during the transition Thanks for sharing your poem and capturing the change of environment
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and excellent rating
Comment from papa55mike
I've seen Robin with at least three or four worms hanging off their beek waiting to feed their young. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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I've seen Robin with at least three or four worms hanging off their beek waiting to feed their young. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Blessings to you too, and for these wonderful words
