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Will his hope be fulfulled?
2 total reviews
Comment from
Patty Mazzurco
The structure is effective in its simplicity, capturing a moment of earnest emotional connection. The poem's brevity enhances its impact, focusing on the essence of romantic desire and the uncertainty that accompanies it. Overall, it's a poignant and evocative piece that communicates deep emotions in just a few words.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
Thank you for your careful read and your encouraging review.
Comment from
RodG
Your 2-8-2 succinctly conveys a universal truth: Young lovers always will whisper promises to one another, hoping true love blooms. Movie romances depend on this plot element to keep the audience enthralled. Rod
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
Thank you for your careful read and your encouraging review.
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