Hoping
Will his hope be fulfulled?2 total reviews
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
The structure is effective in its simplicity, capturing a moment of earnest emotional connection. The poem's brevity enhances its impact, focusing on the essence of romantic desire and the uncertainty that accompanies it. Overall, it's a poignant and evocative piece that communicates deep emotions in just a few words.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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The structure is effective in its simplicity, capturing a moment of earnest emotional connection. The poem's brevity enhances its impact, focusing on the essence of romantic desire and the uncertainty that accompanies it. Overall, it's a poignant and evocative piece that communicates deep emotions in just a few words.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your careful read and your encouraging review.
Comment from RodG
Your 2-8-2 succinctly conveys a universal truth: Young lovers always will whisper promises to one another, hoping true love blooms. Movie romances depend on this plot element to keep the audience enthralled. Rod
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Your 2-8-2 succinctly conveys a universal truth: Young lovers always will whisper promises to one another, hoping true love blooms. Movie romances depend on this plot element to keep the audience enthralled. Rod
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your careful read and your encouraging review.
