Life's Journey
8-Word Poem5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You've given us a great life lesson in only eight words. Amazing. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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You've given us a great life lesson in only eight words. Amazing. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
Comment from jim vecchio
A solid entry for the eight words contest. Ther isn't much tht can be said in such few words, but you said it. Great color scheme. The only advice I can suggest is to use a central, rather than left margin for your words.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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A solid entry for the eight words contest. Ther isn't much tht can be said in such few words, but you said it. Great color scheme. The only advice I can suggest is to use a central, rather than left margin for your words.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
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Keep up the great work.
Comment from bonespur
This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The syllable count seems correct and the subject matter is interesting. I'm not sure what you mean by collect shards bit good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The syllable count seems correct and the subject matter is interesting. I'm not sure what you mean by collect shards bit good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the review and feedback.
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You're welcome
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your piece is concise and impactful, capturing a sense of perseverance and resilience. The brevity of the lines emphasizes the cyclical nature of struggle and renewal. The use of simple yet powerful verbs--"dare," "collect," "move on," "repeat"--creates a rhythmic momentum that mirrors the ongoing process of overcoming challenges. The minimalist approach effectively conveys a message of enduring through trials and continuously striving forward.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Your piece is concise and impactful, capturing a sense of perseverance and resilience. The brevity of the lines emphasizes the cyclical nature of struggle and renewal. The use of simple yet powerful verbs--"dare," "collect," "move on," "repeat"--creates a rhythmic momentum that mirrors the ongoing process of overcoming challenges. The minimalist approach effectively conveys a message of enduring through trials and continuously striving forward.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the review and feedback.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well worded 8 word poem, and I
Enjoyed listening to it and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you the best in the contest. Patricia.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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This is a very well worded 8 word poem, and I
Enjoyed listening to it and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you the best in the contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the review and feedback.