2024 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "~*~ My Beloved ~*~"x
6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is excellently written, and the emotion is strong, extremely sad, but very strong. Suicide continues to be a problem in our society. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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This poem is excellently written, and the emotion is strong, extremely sad, but very strong. Suicide continues to be a problem in our society. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and a rather bleak topic for this hopeless love topic. Now my sky-high mood has plunged from the top to the Basement almost instantly!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and a rather bleak topic for this hopeless love topic. Now my sky-high mood has plunged from the top to the Basement almost instantly!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Love, ir the loss of it, has driving many people to suicide. Your poem expresses this tragic reality very well. T h ank you f o r sharing these sombre verses.
RJ
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Love, ir the loss of it, has driving many people to suicide. Your poem expresses this tragic reality very well. T h ank you f o r sharing these sombre verses.
RJ
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
wow! this was an awesome fictional poem!
excellent imagery - deep and emotional - that felt so real
smooth flow throughout -- love that second stanza with the withered flowers mocking memories and crumbling...
great poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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wow! this was an awesome fictional poem!
excellent imagery - deep and emotional - that felt so real
smooth flow throughout -- love that second stanza with the withered flowers mocking memories and crumbling...
great poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six-stars review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. I thought not too many would review it because it's so intense. Spanish poets are very dramatic. (*=*)
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six-stars review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. I thought not too many would review it because it's so intense. Spanish poets are very dramatic. (*=*)
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, for those who've attempted suicide and mercifully failed and those who are contemplating self harm and suicide, this is directed, you've got eternity to consider, which they don't, thoughtfully and considerately written Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Oh yes, for those who've attempted suicide and mercifully failed and those who are contemplating self harm and suicide, this is directed, you've got eternity to consider, which they don't, thoughtfully and considerately written Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Well done
Comment from BethShelby
This is eerie but so well done. The free verse is excellent and I love all of you presentations. I know your teaching people a lot about differnent kinds of poetry but it would be nice to learn how you do those artistic displays of your poems.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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This is eerie but so well done. The free verse is excellent and I love all of you presentations. I know your teaching people a lot about differnent kinds of poetry but it would be nice to learn how you do those artistic displays of your poems.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊