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An Interesting Thing

an abecedarian poem

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Comment from Aiona
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LOL! I learned a new word today. Your poem made me Google "xenartha." And it fits perfectly into this free verse poem. I don't normally care for free verse, but this poem made me giggle. I think I saw a typo. I think you meant "weaponization" instead of "weaponazation." Or maybe it was a double entendre? Nasally, you know.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
    Thanks, Aiona
Comment from JanPerry
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Its an A to Z poem! I haven't seen these for a long time. I can see a children's book in this setting. With the anteater on a page or even on the cover. Since it's easy to read and digest for children. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
    Thank you, Jan.
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi


There have been some really fun and beautiful entries for this contest. Yours is one of the fun ones.

To think about digressing with the kitten is spot on and then the bottom, half also humorous with the armadillo and the anteater. I didn't know that word until you made me look it up. I think you should put in your notes what it means because people can get annoyed having to go out to the Internet. Or they just won't go at all and then they don't know what the word means. How does it hurt?

I hope the Jell-O was sugar-free because we don't want to give that poor kitten diabetes. My cat loved rice pudding and towards the end of his life I let him have it because I wanted to give some pleasure to him

This is a very humorous poem you've written and I especially like the ending

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
    Thank you, Pam. I just began and went to Z, as is probably obvious.
    : )
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very neat and well written Abecdarian Poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and really neat imagery from the artwork of the ant eater. That ant eater has a very long tongue. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
    Thanks, Teri
reply by Teri7 on 17-Aug-2024
    you are so welcome!
Comment from M.Ceili
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I wasn't sure where this was going at first. Yet by the end, I was laughing at the silliness of it all. Well done and making something out of nothing.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
    Thank you, MC