Zombie Pet War
the pet zombies declare war on humans3 total reviews
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
Well, that was certainly an unusually interesting romp!
Sometimes I wish it could be true. Animals are far superior to humans in many ways. I found this fascinating - a mixture of comic caricature and gory imagery diving into the fractured nature of human response.
I'm glad the dogs won!!! :)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Well, that was certainly an unusually interesting romp!
Sometimes I wish it could be true. Animals are far superior to humans in many ways. I found this fascinating - a mixture of comic caricature and gory imagery diving into the fractured nature of human response.
I'm glad the dogs won!!! :)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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thanks a lot it was fun
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an inventive horror story and some individual dogs do attack humans and we have instances of dog attacks in our country that have shocked us. I enjoyed the dark humour here in your tale of horror, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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This is an inventive horror story and some individual dogs do attack humans and we have instances of dog attacks in our country that have shocked us. I enjoyed the dark humour here in your tale of horror, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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revised extensively much better story now.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
Why did you categorize this as poetry.? It reads just like prose
Your submitting prose to a poetry contest. It might not do well because it's prose
I have a question. What about the cats who depend on meat and can't survive without meat? I guess they have to go too?
I think something like this needs to happen so humans stop destroying the planet. Let animals take over They're cleaner. They took better care of the environment.
I just hope that the big cas survive
Here coordinate without the d
"internet and coordinated strategy with other dogs "
I enjoyed reading your poem (tongue in cheek)
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hi
Why did you categorize this as poetry.? It reads just like prose
Your submitting prose to a poetry contest. It might not do well because it's prose
I have a question. What about the cats who depend on meat and can't survive without meat? I guess they have to go too?
I think something like this needs to happen so humans stop destroying the planet. Let animals take over They're cleaner. They took better care of the environment.
I just hope that the big cas survive
Here coordinate without the d
"internet and coordinated strategy with other dogs "
I enjoyed reading your poem (tongue in cheek)
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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i will revise this somehow it defaulted to Poetry just revised it to make it a much stronger story
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Great!! That contest is for stories so you've got it in the right category now