2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Lovely pictures of ships and lovely poem. I guess, no matter how lost you might be in the sea, God alone can find you. Hopeful poem as we all are ships on this sea called Earth.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Lovely pictures of ships and lovely poem. I guess, no matter how lost you might be in the sea, God alone can find you. Hopeful poem as we all are ships on this sea called Earth.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a great haiku about being lost at sea from the master of the haiku form you captured the feeling of being alone adrift in the vast unending ocean hoping you will be rescued
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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a great haiku about being lost at sea from the master of the haiku form you captured the feeling of being alone adrift in the vast unending ocean hoping you will be rescued
Comment Written 15-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Great entry for the club. Is it not God who find us when we are lost? He uses so m any ways to steady our drift and anchor us to him.
T h ank you for sharing thus inspirational verse.
RJ
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Great entry for the club. Is it not God who find us when we are lost? He uses so m any ways to steady our drift and anchor us to him.
T h ank you for sharing thus inspirational verse.
RJ
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a beautiful poem. The pictures are amazing. I like the part where you say God finds me. He will always be there for us. Great job on this poem.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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What a beautiful poem. The pictures are amazing. I like the part where you say God finds me. He will always be there for us. Great job on this poem.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Begin Again
I imagine that has happened moe times than we will ever know. when someone should have perished or never made it home for one reason or another, God made the light and led them home. Great haiku.
smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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I imagine that has happened moe times than we will ever know. when someone should have perished or never made it home for one reason or another, God made the light and led them home. Great haiku.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Carol
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, no matter where we roam physically or spiritually God will always find us. We are His child, and He always know where we're at and what is on our hearts. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Yes, no matter where we roam physically or spiritually God will always find us. We are His child, and He always know where we're at and what is on our hearts. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. You are right, God is always there to help.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
reminds me of the screaming doggy
and that the sun is screaming LOL!
love the lost at sea and god finds me imagery
a great sea haiku with smooth flow of waving words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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reminds me of the screaming doggy
and that the sun is screaming LOL!
love the lost at sea and god finds me imagery
a great sea haiku with smooth flow of waving words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Ain't it great. He really does seem to show up when we need it and usually when we least expect it. This poem was a reassuring poem that encourages you to understand you are not alone. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Ain't it great. He really does seem to show up when we need it and usually when we least expect it. This poem was a reassuring poem that encourages you to understand you are not alone. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Gretchen
Gypsy
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Gypsy,
A beautiful overall presentation and highlighted text drew my attention to the components of the three lines Haiku.
The sentiments you express and artfully present mirror the thoughts I feel sometimes too. (maybe not so eloquently expressed but definitely relatable)
Those are times I feel my spirits low and I'm in desperate need of God's guiding light.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Hi Gypsy,
A beautiful overall presentation and highlighted text drew my attention to the components of the three lines Haiku.
The sentiments you express and artfully present mirror the thoughts I feel sometimes too. (maybe not so eloquently expressed but definitely relatable)
Those are times I feel my spirits low and I'm in desperate need of God's guiding light.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Shirley, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Lost at Sea, has the proper formatting and notes that being lost at sea is well within the scope of God's parameters and still available for grace.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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This haiku, Lost at Sea, has the proper formatting and notes that being lost at sea is well within the scope of God's parameters and still available for grace.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Bill
Gypsy