Innocent
True story of attempted child abduction5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi PenonFire.
This is a precisely told story about an unforgettable happening.
I am glad, as I am sure you and your family are that you didn't get into that car. It is also good that you didn't understand what had truly happened.
Keep writing an stay healthy.
Happy Holidays
Joan
P.S. I would like you to know that I have just published a book entitled "The Interloper and other stories in poetry and prose". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page.
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Hi PenonFire.
This is a precisely told story about an unforgettable happening.
I am glad, as I am sure you and your family are that you didn't get into that car. It is also good that you didn't understand what had truly happened.
Keep writing an stay healthy.
Happy Holidays
Joan
P.S. I would like you to know that I have just published a book entitled "The Interloper and other stories in poetry and prose". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
Comment from RJ Heritage
Such things you never forget. Thank God for the quick response of your brothers. You told it very well, clear and detailed descrition that set the imagery.
Thank you for sharing.
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Such things you never forget. Thank God for the quick response of your brothers. You told it very well, clear and detailed descrition that set the imagery.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
Comment from Sally Law
Good morning, PenofFire! Good to see you today. I had something similar happen to me as well. I was 7. The Lord stationed His angels around you to protect you, protect us both! Praise the Lord!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Sally Xoxo's
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Good morning, PenofFire! Good to see you today. I had something similar happen to me as well. I was 7. The Lord stationed His angels around you to protect you, protect us both! Praise the Lord!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Sally Xoxo's
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh wow, I have chills running down my spine. It's so good that you decided to share the information with your family before going with her. I'll bet it left an impression on you!! A good decision saved the day.
By the way, great to be 91 and going strong!!
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Oh wow, I have chills running down my spine. It's so good that you decided to share the information with your family before going with her. I'll bet it left an impression on you!! A good decision saved the day.
By the way, great to be 91 and going strong!!
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you Rhonda for the great review. May the Lord bless you richly.
Comment from papa55mike
It's amazing that you escaped whatever was going to happen. Nobody talked about those things in 1939. Please check your last two lines, you need a paragraph break. What a wonderfully written little story. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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It's amazing that you escaped whatever was going to happen. Nobody talked about those things in 1939. Please check your last two lines, you need a paragraph break. What a wonderfully written little story. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
