The Gift of Life
Senryu for the club9 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Hello Debra. Your senryu is simple and sincere and leaves a lasting impression of serenity and gratitude gained through reflection.
Excellent contribution to the Haiku Club. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hello Debra. Your senryu is simple and sincere and leaves a lasting impression of serenity and gratitude gained through reflection.
Excellent contribution to the Haiku Club. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hello Gloria
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and generous star rating. I appreciate both :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An uplifting post Debra and there is a lack off appreciation in the world for the little things in life and we should count our blessings as we journey through life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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An uplifting post Debra and there is a lack off appreciation in the world for the little things in life and we should count our blessings as we journey through life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hello Dolly :)
Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from lyenochka
Hi Debra! Good to see you back and loved your gratefulness poem. That's the best way to live to always remember how blessed we are in those "silver linings" no matter all the daily trials of the "lessons".
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hi Debra! Good to see you back and loved your gratefulness poem. That's the best way to live to always remember how blessed we are in those "silver linings" no matter all the daily trials of the "lessons".
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hello Helen :)
Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Dear Debra, you craft these succinct verses so well. And this senryu doesn't disappoint, conveying its strong message that is so familiar and yet so easily forgotten - to count our blessings. As ever, beautifully presented too. Well done! Hope you and your family are keeping well:)) Debbie xx
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Dear Debra, you craft these succinct verses so well. And this senryu doesn't disappoint, conveying its strong message that is so familiar and yet so easily forgotten - to count our blessings. As ever, beautifully presented too. Well done! Hope you and your family are keeping well:)) Debbie xx
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hello Debbie :)
Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
We are doing ok, thanks! I hope you and your family are also well.
I continue to hope to be a more frequent visitor to Fanstory!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the gratefulness senryu event for the haiku club. I love the presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wouds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Excellent entry for the gratefulness senryu event for the haiku club. I love the presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wouds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hello Gypsy :)
Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
A lovely senryu poem, Debra dear. I sense and see the grateful heart within. How refreshing in these times of copious complaints. Sigh.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the senryu.
Sal Xoxo's
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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A lovely senryu poem, Debra dear. I sense and see the grateful heart within. How refreshing in these times of copious complaints. Sigh.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the senryu.
Sal Xoxo's
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hello Sal :)
Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
I hope you're well...
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from royowen
They say, especially in the song, and actually the poet, John Milton wrote every cloud has a silver lining, despite the fact that we use dark as a grim metaphor, we could weave hope into that particular metaphor. Beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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They say, especially in the song, and actually the poet, John Milton wrote every cloud has a silver lining, despite the fact that we use dark as a grim metaphor, we could weave hope into that particular metaphor. Beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hello Roy :)
Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
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Most welcome
Comment from patcelaw
Not seen anything from you in a while and it is good to see you back in writing. I think all too often we do not appreciate even the smallest things in our lives the way we should. Sometimes the very smallest things in our lives are the biggest blessings if we really think about it. Patricia.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Not seen anything from you in a while and it is good to see you back in writing. I think all too often we do not appreciate even the smallest things in our lives the way we should. Sometimes the very smallest things in our lives are the biggest blessings if we really think about it. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hello Patricia :)
Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, The Gift of Life, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers to accept all the highs and lows in life, because this is the only road we have here.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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This senryu, The Gift of Life, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers to accept all the highs and lows in life, because this is the only road we have here.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Hello Bill :)
Thank you so much for your feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
