Goldilocks Italian Style
A contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Sounds quite familiar... I refer to the hot-headed Italians! LOL Being a "medigani" in a family of pure bloods is like being the scraps of a leftover family meal.... though this girl showed them they were wrong over the years and did precisely what Riccio did... stormed off, never to return. LOL Just a bit of fun today! Actually, over the years, the Italian mellowed and learned what my family was about, too! I truly enjoyed your story. It was perfect!
Have a great day!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Sounds quite familiar... I refer to the hot-headed Italians! LOL Being a "medigani" in a family of pure bloods is like being the scraps of a leftover family meal.... though this girl showed them they were wrong over the years and did precisely what Riccio did... stormed off, never to return. LOL Just a bit of fun today! Actually, over the years, the Italian mellowed and learned what my family was about, too! I truly enjoyed your story. It was perfect!
Have a great day!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Carol for taking the time to read my post.
Also, a belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY to you!!
John
Comment from artisart4u
Yes, under the circumstances he thought he could do what he wanted to do.
Sounds like a nice restaurant. Good luck with your poem and the picture is beautiful.
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Yes, under the circumstances he thought he could do what he wanted to do.
Sounds like a nice restaurant. Good luck with your poem and the picture is beautiful.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a rather unusual take on an old fairy tale. I love all the Italian language you used throughout the story. It adds a certain flair to the writing. Best of luck in the contest.
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This is a rather unusual take on an old fairy tale. I love all the Italian language you used throughout the story. It adds a certain flair to the writing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Well. This is certainly a very original way to retell the fairytale. I'm trying to figure out who the three bears are in this story. Are they the three brothers and sisters who own the restaurant? Because he did wear out his welcome there and it sounded like one of the guys, Santino, was from the mob since Pina feared for Riccio's safety. I probably made too much of that
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Well. This is certainly a very original way to retell the fairytale. I'm trying to figure out who the three bears are in this story. Are they the three brothers and sisters who own the restaurant? Because he did wear out his welcome there and it sounded like one of the guys, Santino, was from the mob since Pina feared for Riccio's safety. I probably made too much of that
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much.
Cheers,
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I loved how you brought Bromadino's Family Pizza to life! What lively characters. The playful banter and the excellent descriptions made the world of the ristorante feel so authentic and engaging. Riccio Li d'oro's escapades added a wonderful touch of humor. Your writing has a fantastic rhythm and a great sense of atmosphere - I'm eagerly looking forward to more of your stories!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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I loved how you brought Bromadino's Family Pizza to life! What lively characters. The playful banter and the excellent descriptions made the world of the ristorante feel so authentic and engaging. Riccio Li d'oro's escapades added a wonderful touch of humor. Your writing has a fantastic rhythm and a great sense of atmosphere - I'm eagerly looking forward to more of your stories!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much.
Cheers!