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Ol' Silver and Red

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Medeival Ohmie and the dragon Ol' Silver and Red

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Ohmie's plan to loot the dragon's treasure trove didn't work out exactly as he planned. Blado has to figure out how to save Ohmie as he is hurt and hanging on the dragon's back. The Princess decides to forgive Ohmie for hiding his real identity because she realizes she loves him. So Ohmie hiding his princely state was a ploy that did work out.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
    Thank you for your very kind review.
    Ohmie's plan isn't finished yet.
Comment from lyenochka
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A heat thumping chapter. Hope Blado and Ohmie figure out how to get our of there. Blinding on of the dragon's eyes helps. They sure could use Princess May's help but she's thinking of how she really loves Ohmie. Hopefully she can save him!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
    Thank you!
    I worried that I couldn't use any dialogue in this chapter - I just couldn't put any two of them together.
Comment from jim vecchio
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A great continuation! A fantastic battle and a revelation of love. I've been thinking if this ever sold as a movie, who would be best suited to do it. I m a movie fan, and I love Oriental kaiju movies. There is a trilogy of movies out in recent years: "Reigo vs The Battleship Yamato" (mainly serious) followed by "REIGA" and "REIGA vs. KING OHGA". Both are mainly campy and over-the top. The writer/director is Shinpei Hayashiya. He uses brightly colored CGI and animation with live action, but does it in such a way, the real looks real but the other parts seem like they're from another universe entirely. This, I think, would work well with your Ohmie series.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
    Thank you. I'm absolutely delighted that you can 'see' it.
reply by jim vecchio on 02-Aug-2024
    Maybe one day, it'll come to the notice of some producer.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Yes, sir, everything going on, the close call, and then at the end, your softer side couldn't leave out a touch of loving feelings to close it out. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
    Thank you. I always appreciate your reviews.
    May was screaming for some air time! (smiley face here)
reply by Ric Myworld on 02-Aug-2024
    I always enjoy your outstanding stories! Good for May. :-)
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

It doesn't matter how many other (different) things you post. Ohmie remains your strength, irrespective of what he and May get up to. This was a thriller of their lives. kay

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
    Thank you! I must agree... mostly because he is so much fun to write! (smiley face here)
    And thank you so very much for the six stars!