2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "Gazing at the Harvest Moon ".
8 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
This is another stellar piece, Gypsy. I gave up on love thirty years ago. I don't have the energy for it anymore, lol. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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This is another stellar piece, Gypsy. I gave up on love thirty years ago. I don't have the energy for it anymore, lol. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
i like "love" in the burnt red hue in-between the stanzas - it's there, just unseen... kinda cool.
excellent imagery through and cool colours -- though imo the last line should be a teal-ish shade to match the ocean -- but that could be just me lol
smooth flow of words like waves...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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i like "love" in the burnt red hue in-between the stanzas - it's there, just unseen... kinda cool.
excellent imagery through and cool colours -- though imo the last line should be a teal-ish shade to match the ocean -- but that could be just me lol
smooth flow of words like waves...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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I don't know why but my stanzas kept sticking together so I added the transparent word to separate them.
Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm sure you already know that my favorite season is autumn because of the gorgeous colors and of course, the romantic harvest moon. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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I'm sure you already know that my favorite season is autumn because of the gorgeous colors and of course, the romantic harvest moon. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from dovemarie
Hi Gypsy,good poem for autumn, I liked all the colors of fall that you incorporated into it, and I also liked the pictures, I felt as though I were on the sailboat pursuing "dreams of forgotten love." Dove
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Hi Gypsy,good poem for autumn, I liked all the colors of fall that you incorporated into it, and I also liked the pictures, I felt as though I were on the sailboat pursuing "dreams of forgotten love." Dove
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Dove. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review. I am happy you like it.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from lyenochka
That's a gorgeous presentation of pictures. The poem is sad and reminds me of how you missed your first experience of love in Spain and how far away he was from you.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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That's a gorgeous presentation of pictures. The poem is sad and reminds me of how you missed your first experience of love in Spain and how far away he was from you.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I was not writing about an specific man but my personal relationships with men do inspire my poems... I think it's the same with many poets and artists in general.
Pedro, my first boyfriend always treated me lovingly, he is the best compared to all the other men. I hope he is well and happy. I tried contacting him after I moved but couldn't find him.
Thank you very much, big sister. I'm not happy with this poem. I will work on it tomorrow.
Love ❤️
Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a beautiful poem that is very well illustrated with words of love which also compliment it very well. I think the writer seems to be speaking about lost love, once close, but now seperated by time and space.
RJ
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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This is a beautiful poem that is very well illustrated with words of love which also compliment it very well. I think the writer seems to be speaking about lost love, once close, but now seperated by time and space.
RJ
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy hugs 🤗
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Magnetically drawn by the moon towards the shores of a lost love, your fine verse has a hauntingly dark quality. My favourite line: I breathe in the crisp breeze. Just a note - your 'love' coloured font is barely visible. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Magnetically drawn by the moon towards the shores of a lost love, your fine verse has a hauntingly dark quality. My favourite line: I breathe in the crisp breeze. Just a note - your 'love' coloured font is barely visible. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Yes, I used a font that is almost transparent. For some reason, I couldn't place a line between stanzas so the word is just holding a place. Maybe I will add a note.
Thank you very much, Debbie 😊
Gypsy hugs 🤗
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely worded. It's very beautifully presented. I wish you the very best. Best with all of your writing and may you have a wonderful rest of the week and a good weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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This is very nicely worded. It's very beautifully presented. I wish you the very best. Best with all of your writing and may you have a wonderful rest of the week and a good weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia
Gypsy hugs 🤗