Return To Concorde Valley
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Battle of the Gods - Part 2"Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.
18 total reviews
Comment from Esther Brown
I am enjoying your story so much. It is refreshing to read fantasy fiction. I have been so drowned in my own life issues sometimes I forget imagination can be a coping mechanism and just plain fun to indulge in. Esther
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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I am enjoying your story so much. It is refreshing to read fantasy fiction. I have been so drowned in my own life issues sometimes I forget imagination can be a coping mechanism and just plain fun to indulge in. Esther
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Ester, thank you so much for the six stars review. I've written three responses now, but it keeps popping up, so I will thank you again, and maybe you will get it this time. If you've already gotten a few, disregard this one, lol.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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An extra thanks or two never hurts. I have a funky internet connection. Things go out randomly and texts arrive late...probably my side. Esther
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Ahhh, well, at least I got to message you three times, lol.
Comment from Ulla
Hi, Rhonda, another forceful chapter, but Hades must not win, under no circumstances. I do hope that Echo yet again will come to her senses. I love this tug of war. Now what? Hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Hi, Rhonda, another forceful chapter, but Hades must not win, under no circumstances. I do hope that Echo yet again will come to her senses. I love this tug of war. Now what? Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Someone's about to tug a different direction, lol.
Thanks for the six stars, my friend!!
Big hugs,
Rhonda
Comment from Jacob1395
I love the Greek myths so I will definitely be reading on to find out what happened next. You captured the intensity of the battle well in your writing and I could hear the clang of the armour in my mind as I was reading. I thought you portrayed Hades really well in this piece. I really enjoyed reading it, I'm looking forward to reading the next post.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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I love the Greek myths so I will definitely be reading on to find out what happened next. You captured the intensity of the battle well in your writing and I could hear the clang of the armour in my mind as I was reading. I thought you portrayed Hades really well in this piece. I really enjoyed reading it, I'm looking forward to reading the next post.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Hi Jacob,
Thank you so much for reading. This book is about at its conclusion, but I will start a prequel soon. I hope you can stay with it. I appreciate your input.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Daylily
Whoooo...what a chapter! I cannot imagine anything more you could have added to make an improvement. Loved every line. Including all the gorgeous pictures adds another level of excellence.
Terrific cliff hanger, too! Smiles, Lily
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Whoooo...what a chapter! I cannot imagine anything more you could have added to make an improvement. Loved every line. Including all the gorgeous pictures adds another level of excellence.
Terrific cliff hanger, too! Smiles, Lily
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Lily, thank you so much for the six stars and the lovely comments. You're a sweetheart!! I recently learned how to add the pictures in, then I had way too much fun with it, lol.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment from royowen
A lot of talking at the end, but who knows what's going on, has Theo really caved in? And is Echo doomed to be Hades' wife, perhaps Theo knows that Echo has more resistance in her than even Echo knows, but we know that good will always win over evil, you're just giving us a thrill, Rhonda, well dine, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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A lot of talking at the end, but who knows what's going on, has Theo really caved in? And is Echo doomed to be Hades' wife, perhaps Theo knows that Echo has more resistance in her than even Echo knows, but we know that good will always win over evil, you're just giving us a thrill, Rhonda, well dine, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Hi Roy,
You've pretty much nailed it. Theo didn't cave, he's trying to get Hades off-guard. He's also going to give Echo a choice. Remember, he has friends in high places. Yes, good triumphs over evil, but everyone has their own choice to make.
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Great story Rhonda
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine chapter, Rhonda----is it curtains for our frustrated lovers? It sure seems that way. Tune in next week for another chapter of Return to Concord Valley--well, maybe not next week, but it sounded good!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Another fine chapter, Rhonda----is it curtains for our frustrated lovers? It sure seems that way. Tune in next week for another chapter of Return to Concord Valley--well, maybe not next week, but it sounded good!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Oh, Mike, you know I'm too much of a romantic for that, lol, but I'm not afraid to play about with emotions, either.
Thanks for the review, my friend,
Rhonda
Comment from lyenochka
Oh no! I was sure that Echo would be able to resist. Why did Theo turn away? I wasn't sure why he even said that he's "not as easily frightened as a young woman from outside our world and a couple of children."
My favorite part was Sunny coming to awaken her. Maybe Sunny can break Hades' hypnotic pull.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Oh no! I was sure that Echo would be able to resist. Why did Theo turn away? I wasn't sure why he even said that he's "not as easily frightened as a young woman from outside our world and a couple of children."
My favorite part was Sunny coming to awaken her. Maybe Sunny can break Hades' hypnotic pull.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Hi Helen,
Thank you so much for the review. Theo isn't finished yet, remember he told Hermes he knew what he was doing. I'll put another chapter out soon and it will all make sense.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment from rspoet
Hello Rhonda,
A marvelous chapter filled with action and suspense. The confrontation between Hades and the three younger gods is well done. Theo is quite confident, perhaps with good reason, as we have not heard from Thanatos yet. I doubt all the trouble Theo went to (and gift he gave) will have all been for naught. I suspect Hades will be mighty surprised.
The last line was very telling as to Hades true nature.
The next chapter should be very interesting. Great idea to hold Thanatos back. (if, of course, that is indeed what you are doing)
Well done, my friend.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Hello Rhonda,
A marvelous chapter filled with action and suspense. The confrontation between Hades and the three younger gods is well done. Theo is quite confident, perhaps with good reason, as we have not heard from Thanatos yet. I doubt all the trouble Theo went to (and gift he gave) will have all been for naught. I suspect Hades will be mighty surprised.
The last line was very telling as to Hades true nature.
The next chapter should be very interesting. Great idea to hold Thanatos back. (if, of course, that is indeed what you are doing)
Well done, my friend.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Hi Robert,
Thank you for the six stars, my friend!!
You are quite right, Thanatos will make an opportune appearance soon, and Theo has his reasons for letting the drama unfold. He isn't finished!!
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Oh wow... A very splendid Fantasy story that I love! Your superbly writing style with your artwork's choices are excellent. Great job, and congrats to overall exceptional rating if only I have 6 stars option. I like your background introduction, plus, your main character name "Echo" is very smart choice because the name is surely fit with her personality and unique. Wish you all the best!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Oh wow... A very splendid Fantasy story that I love! Your superbly writing style with your artwork's choices are excellent. Great job, and congrats to overall exceptional rating if only I have 6 stars option. I like your background introduction, plus, your main character name "Echo" is very smart choice because the name is surely fit with her personality and unique. Wish you all the best!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Hi, my friend,
Thank you so much for the lovely review and the virtual six stars, my friend!! I'm glad you picked up on the name Echo. I chose it for many reasons. Take care,
Rhonda
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Hi, you're so welcome and have a nice, beautiful evening!
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Hi, you're so welcome and have a nice, beautiful evening!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
ECHO!!!! NO!!!! FIGHT!!!! Echo has to fight against Hades. She has to win and end up with Theo. That is who she is meant to be with. I can't wait to read more. I really like this story.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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ECHO!!!! NO!!!! FIGHT!!!! Echo has to fight against Hades. She has to win and end up with Theo. That is who she is meant to be with. I can't wait to read more. I really like this story.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Hi Barbara! Theo isn't finished yet. He told Hermes he knew what he was doing. It's all part of his master plan!!
Thanks for the beautiful six stars, my friend!! I appreciate you very much!
Hugs,
Rhonda