Confidentially, Yours
letters from two ladies21 total reviews
Comment from Esther Brown
Jim I loved it. Grumbling a bit, because you missed a couple of tiny things: weas, should be was. Short should be shorts and which airlines was it? Qantas? The story was otherwise excellent and much enjoyed. Esther
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Jim I loved it. Grumbling a bit, because you missed a couple of tiny things: weas, should be was. Short should be shorts and which airlines was it? Qantas? The story was otherwise excellent and much enjoyed. Esther
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
Comment from thoughtgame2
I really liked the way you put this story together sir. It has a nice flow, while being so-, gentle on the heart.Also;it is very possible in this life time,while we see this happening, in real time, everyday. Thank you for the fresh approach. Loved it.
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I really liked the way you put this story together sir. It has a nice flow, while being so-, gentle on the heart.Also;it is very possible in this life time,while we see this happening, in real time, everyday. Thank you for the fresh approach. Loved it.
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
Comment from Mintybee
This story gives the reader a lot to think about: loyalty, fickle love, the uncertainty of life, and the way things can change for completely unexpected reasons. I think it was brave to tackle so much.
Mintybee
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This story gives the reader a lot to think about: loyalty, fickle love, the uncertainty of life, and the way things can change for completely unexpected reasons. I think it was brave to tackle so much.
Mintybee
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent switch, apart from the fact that you disposed of one protaganist to an explosion a little summarily. It would have been outstanding if you could have carried on the suspense a bit further. kay
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This is an excellent switch, apart from the fact that you disposed of one protaganist to an explosion a little summarily. It would have been outstanding if you could have carried on the suspense a bit further. kay
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
Comment from royowen
I was thinking that this would make a great story continuing on with the other guy, who's unfortunate demise had a girl waiting for him, and I think it would make a great sequel, to this story, outstanding story Jim, blessings Roy
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I was thinking that this would make a great story continuing on with the other guy, who's unfortunate demise had a girl waiting for him, and I think it would make a great sequel, to this story, outstanding story Jim, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Well there was all kinds of Karma-type stuff happening in this story. but now I am wondering what will happen if he finds that fair lady and tries to talk to her. You may have to write abother story. Well done.
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Well there was all kinds of Karma-type stuff happening in this story. but now I am wondering what will happen if he finds that fair lady and tries to talk to her. You may have to write abother story. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
Comment from estory
I like quirky little stories like this; you had a great premise here, the two men taking each other's suitcases and reading love letters for someone else. There is the one woman who is about to leave the one man, and the other preparing to see the other home. I thought the explosion over the ocean on the way back was a bit abrupt. I actually think this might make a great idea for a longer story, or even a short novel. This is a great idea that digs into questions of our different views of love, how they contrast, and compliment each other. I say expand it. estory
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I like quirky little stories like this; you had a great premise here, the two men taking each other's suitcases and reading love letters for someone else. There is the one woman who is about to leave the one man, and the other preparing to see the other home. I thought the explosion over the ocean on the way back was a bit abrupt. I actually think this might make a great idea for a longer story, or even a short novel. This is a great idea that digs into questions of our different views of love, how they contrast, and compliment each other. I say expand it. estory
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
Comment from Sanku
It is convenient that the other plane exploded. But there is no guarantee that Jalyn would welcome him..would she fail to recognize that he was not her'darling'..
very intriguing ..all the best for the contest
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It is convenient that the other plane exploded. But there is no guarantee that Jalyn would welcome him..would she fail to recognize that he was not her'darling'..
very intriguing ..all the best for the contest
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Why not? Look for the gal with the balloons and Teddy Bear?
Nicely written.
At least the clothes should fit.
But what about the Hindi woman at the bar?
Best wishes.
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Why not? Look for the gal with the balloons and Teddy Bear?
Nicely written.
At least the clothes should fit.
But what about the Hindi woman at the bar?
Best wishes.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
Comment from pome lover
well, let's hope Carter can convince Jalyn that she is the one for him. I hope he does. She sounds nice.
It also sounds like he lucked out, losing Celia.
One of them deserves a happy ending, and it surely wasn't Andrew.
This is an interesting concept for a story, told succinctly and ending with a hopeful note.
Katharine
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well, let's hope Carter can convince Jalyn that she is the one for him. I hope he does. She sounds nice.
It also sounds like he lucked out, losing Celia.
One of them deserves a happy ending, and it surely wasn't Andrew.
This is an interesting concept for a story, told succinctly and ending with a hopeful note.
Katharine
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024