A Mountain most High
club entree: Andaree6 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Erika,
This is a well done Andaree poem. You follow the form well and the story is told clearly. It shows how in the beginning and the end he see's the mountain.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile bio.
You can also find it by going on Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The interloper.
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Hi Erika,
This is a well done Andaree poem. You follow the form well and the story is told clearly. It shows how in the beginning and the end he see's the mountain.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile bio.
You can also find it by going on Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The interloper.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Mountains do seem to inspire us as we are in awe of their magnificence. I enjoyed your tribute to the scenery here, nature brings us some wonderful picturesque landscapes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Mountains do seem to inspire us as we are in awe of their magnificence. I enjoyed your tribute to the scenery here, nature brings us some wonderful picturesque landscapes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you :)
Comment from jim vecchio
What an excellent Andaree! Imagine meeting God on top of a mountain! Moses was truly blessed. He did God's bidding well except for one mistake which cost him the privilege of entering the Promised Land.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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What an excellent Andaree! Imagine meeting God on top of a mountain! Moses was truly blessed. He did God's bidding well except for one mistake which cost him the privilege of entering the Promised Land.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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He was certainly blessed but it came with a lot of hardship. I don't think he would have made it if it wasn't for this God experience.
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We all need to learn there is nothing we can do without God but can achieve anything WITH God!
Comment from jessizero
I think you did a great job with this poetry format. It seems that you got the syllable count right, and you had the required rhymes and repetition. I enjoyed the poem's content, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I think you did a great job with this poetry format. It seems that you got the syllable count right, and you had the required rhymes and repetition. I enjoyed the poem's content, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much! i enjoy these club challenges as they introduce me to new forms
Comment from shelley kaye
a very soothing poem
to calm noisy minds and hearts
great andaree with smooth flow and rhyme and deep feeling
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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a very soothing poem
to calm noisy minds and hearts
great andaree with smooth flow and rhyme and deep feeling
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the challenge and for reading my entree :)
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This a beautiful poem that evokes such positive imagery. I can honestly envision your soul flying over majestic mountains. There are no errors that I can see. Good job and happy writing!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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This a beautiful poem that evokes such positive imagery. I can honestly envision your soul flying over majestic mountains. There are no errors that I can see. Good job and happy writing!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you :)