Climbing Flowers
Flowers reach for the sky44 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your lovely poem, Pam. The imagery is beautiful, as are the thoughts expressed. Strong rhyme and meter in each stanza.
You are a flower in a way, as you bring beauty to the world with your poetry. Thanks for sharing.
Nancy
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed your lovely poem, Pam. The imagery is beautiful, as are the thoughts expressed. Strong rhyme and meter in each stanza.
You are a flower in a way, as you bring beauty to the world with your poetry. Thanks for sharing.
Nancy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you for a lovely review, encouraging words, and generous rating and for embarrassing me and making me blush
Comment from Jacob1395
This is a really well written piece and I loved the imagery of the flowers climbing higher as they grow, I think your piece paints a beautiful image of spring and summer as well. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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This is a really well written piece and I loved the imagery of the flowers climbing higher as they grow, I think your piece paints a beautiful image of spring and summer as well. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from mrsmajor
What a delightful poem, Pamusart, so well written using rhymed quatrain verses...I love the idea of being a flower, but right now I'm trying to keep my "Fiddle Leaf House plant alive"...
Indeed flowers do have a wonderful life though.I got a beautiful bouquet for mothers day, and It's now hanging upside down so the beautiful Roses will dry...and I can have them for a long time. Thanks for sharing this with us, sorry you can't be a Flower, but I'm glad you still enjoy them...(and they enjoy you!)
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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What a delightful poem, Pamusart, so well written using rhymed quatrain verses...I love the idea of being a flower, but right now I'm trying to keep my "Fiddle Leaf House plant alive"...
Indeed flowers do have a wonderful life though.I got a beautiful bouquet for mothers day, and It's now hanging upside down so the beautiful Roses will dry...and I can have them for a long time. Thanks for sharing this with us, sorry you can't be a Flower, but I'm glad you still enjoy them...(and they enjoy you!)
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for the six shiny stars and for your wonderful comments. They made my day.
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You're very welcome, it was indeed, My pleasure!
Hugs,
Victoria
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I love nature - it is where I feel closest to God. You did a wonderful job of expressing a desire to be one with nature. I think I would like to be a tree.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I love nature - it is where I feel closest to God. You did a wonderful job of expressing a desire to be one with nature. I think I would like to be a tree.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Nicki.B
I really enjoyed this. I've just come from a visit from my Dad and Stepmoms and they were beaming over the progress of their 'hot pokers', when they come it they grow so quickly it's crazy! Your poem is lovely testament to all things Blooming beautiful around us and the appreciation you have for it is really expressed here, well done flower!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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I really enjoyed this. I've just come from a visit from my Dad and Stepmoms and they were beaming over the progress of their 'hot pokers', when they come it they grow so quickly it's crazy! Your poem is lovely testament to all things Blooming beautiful around us and the appreciation you have for it is really expressed here, well done flower!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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lol. You have granted me the wish of being a flower
Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
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Haha! Love it x
Comment from Michele Harber
What a lovely idea that, even if you can't truly "be" a flower, the spirit of it can live inside you.
It's a beautiful poem, tinged with both sadness and optimism, and just a bit of humor ("but, I don't even have a stem").
Overall, the poem is uplifting and hopeful, a pleasure to read for its concept as well as its lovely rhyme and rhythm.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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What a lovely idea that, even if you can't truly "be" a flower, the spirit of it can live inside you.
It's a beautiful poem, tinged with both sadness and optimism, and just a bit of humor ("but, I don't even have a stem").
Overall, the poem is uplifting and hopeful, a pleasure to read for its concept as well as its lovely rhyme and rhythm.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for the shiny stars. Thank you also for your wonderful comments. They made my day.
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You're welcome as always, Pam. I'm glad we've become friends since you came back to FanStory.
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Me too, friend
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Thank you so much Michele for your encouragement and nice review
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My pleasure, as always.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
i like poem that goes from a look at nature and climbing flowers then shifting to looking at your life as if you were a climbing flower well done poem
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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i like poem that goes from a look at nature and climbing flowers then shifting to looking at your life as if you were a climbing flower well done poem
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from ESOSTINE
You have written a very beautiful poem, celebrating the work of God in nature. Behind the poem is also the beautiful heart of the author that blooms and gladdens those around hear. I am reading this work over and over as I feel the beauty of the flowers bloom inside of me. Well done, dear Pam.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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You have written a very beautiful poem, celebrating the work of God in nature. Behind the poem is also the beautiful heart of the author that blooms and gladdens those around hear. I am reading this work over and over as I feel the beauty of the flowers bloom inside of me. Well done, dear Pam.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for the shiny stars and for your wonderful comments. They made my day.
Comment from Steve Foreman
Oh I think you are a climbing bloom, Pamusart! This is a lovely, flowery poem, full of good word choice and versification, which, for me, is the only way to write poetry!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Oh I think you are a climbing bloom, Pamusart! This is a lovely, flowery poem, full of good word choice and versification, which, for me, is the only way to write poetry!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and for the shiny six stars
Comment from Wendy G
Very well done, and I like the thought that flowers enable us to enter into a world of peace and beauty, and restoration, as in your third stanza. Your poem reminds us that we can have the qualities of flowers, without needing to be a flower.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Very well done, and I like the thought that flowers enable us to enter into a world of peace and beauty, and restoration, as in your third stanza. Your poem reminds us that we can have the qualities of flowers, without needing to be a flower.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review