Ol' Silver and Red
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Ohmie saved himself from the dragon's cave but needed help getting back to the castle. He decided since the dragon stole the gold and jewels, it made sense for them to steal them back. Only the four of them set out to prove their theory, which older people would think was crazy. Good story, as always.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Ohmie saved himself from the dragon's cave but needed help getting back to the castle. He decided since the dragon stole the gold and jewels, it made sense for them to steal them back. Only the four of them set out to prove their theory, which older people would think was crazy. Good story, as always.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your great review.
Comment from lyenochka
Ohmie has a mouth of steel to hold that diamond for so long.
The three of them must be extra brave to plan to rob the dragon of his "stolen goods ".
I liked how the two rescue parties each saw Ohmie/Waynard as a different person.
the Blado and the other (the?)
Many conversations with Ohmie descended to silent through the eyebrow (silence?)
Blado choked at spewed at the unwelcomed vision (choked and spewed)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Ohmie has a mouth of steel to hold that diamond for so long.
The three of them must be extra brave to plan to rob the dragon of his "stolen goods ".
I liked how the two rescue parties each saw Ohmie/Waynard as a different person.
the Blado and the other (the?)
Many conversations with Ohmie descended to silent through the eyebrow (silence?)
Blado choked at spewed at the unwelcomed vision (choked and spewed)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your great review and the several catches. It would appear this chapter wasn't quite ready.
(The diamond was tucked high where dippers pack Skoal) smiley face here
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My cheeks hurt just thinking about it! 😂
Comment from royowen
I love the fact that was pointed out that dragons had lots and lots of strengths and very few weaknesses, but I remember in the Hobbit, Smaug had one vulnerable from which he died. The thought of May her curls scorched of by the fire of the dragon makes one tremble, well done Wayne, good tale, blessings Roy
Typo . Not even know (the) Ohmie. That?
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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I love the fact that was pointed out that dragons had lots and lots of strengths and very few weaknesses, but I remember in the Hobbit, Smaug had one vulnerable from which he died. The thought of May her curls scorched of by the fire of the dragon makes one tremble, well done Wayne, good tale, blessings Roy
Typo . Not even know (the) Ohmie. That?
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your great review and for the catch.
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Most welcome
Comment from Lindsey Russell
I like this chapter. There's so much going on in it though. I can follow it though so that's okay. Good job with this and happy writing. Good luck finishing the novel.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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I like this chapter. There's so much going on in it though. I can follow it though so that's okay. Good job with this and happy writing. Good luck finishing the novel.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much.
Right now it's only about 20K words.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I'm learning a lot about dragons and getting about what should or shouldn't be done, in my humble opinion. And I'd say, avoid the dragons at all cost. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Well, I'm learning a lot about dragons and getting about what should or shouldn't be done, in my humble opinion. And I'd say, avoid the dragons at all cost. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Great advice!
Thank you!
Comment from jim vecchio
It struck me that, should Spielberg ever do a film on this, you'd need a special narrator, so as to not miss any of the tongue-in-cheek and humorous descriptions. Most of the good narrators are gone. Let's see...Can't think of a thing... No more Edward Everett Hortons around...Well, I'll think about it. Meanwhile, if the cat-gut salesman ever opens a Chinese restaurant, please avoid it.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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It struck me that, should Spielberg ever do a film on this, you'd need a special narrator, so as to not miss any of the tongue-in-cheek and humorous descriptions. Most of the good narrators are gone. Let's see...Can't think of a thing... No more Edward Everett Hortons around...Well, I'll think about it. Meanwhile, if the cat-gut salesman ever opens a Chinese restaurant, please avoid it.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Good idea - cats.
Thank you for your great review.
(I think Morgan Freeman is still alive.)
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Yes, he might make a good narrator. Remember to notify Spielberg!