Another Day
Another Opportunity10 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Sweet. Quite a good picture. I really can't visit like I used to. I miss it. It is all done by fanstory and email mostly. I am one of the old farts that needs to be visited. hahaha Karen
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Sweet. Quite a good picture. I really can't visit like I used to. I miss it. It is all done by fanstory and email mostly. I am one of the old farts that needs to be visited. hahaha Karen
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this wonderful idea in a well written contest entry. Yes, we all start in our own neighborhoods, we could make a difference. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful idea in a well written contest entry. Yes, we all start in our own neighborhoods, we could make a difference. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara!
Comment from Wendy G
I like your poem about showing initiative in one's own neighbourhood, particularly as there is the gift of time and conversation along with the acts of caring. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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I like your poem about showing initiative in one's own neighbourhood, particularly as there is the gift of time and conversation along with the acts of caring. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Wendy!
Comment from jim vecchio
This was a very worthwhile entry for this ABC Contest. Thank God for involved, concerned neighbors! Here's hoping this will touch hearts and open people's eyes as well as making it to the top.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This was a very worthwhile entry for this ABC Contest. Thank God for involved, concerned neighbors! Here's hoping this will touch hearts and open people's eyes as well as making it to the top.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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I appreciate your very kind review, Jim. Thank you very much.
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God Bless, my friend!
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Hi, I like your simplicity opening sentence, "Another Opportunity," and a great title, "Another Day." Congrats to you, an overall to your writing an excellent 5star for your ABC Poem, and wish you all the best!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Hi, I like your simplicity opening sentence, "Another Opportunity," and a great title, "Another Day." Congrats to you, an overall to your writing an excellent 5star for your ABC Poem, and wish you all the best!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much!
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You're so welcome, and have a good evening! :)
Comment from bonespur
It's people that care about other people such as depicted in your poem that make me keep my faith in humanity. It pays to know your neighbor. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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It's people that care about other people such as depicted in your poem that make me keep my faith in humanity. It pays to know your neighbor. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Much thanks for your kind review!
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You're welcome
Comment from nancy Laine
I have never written an abc poem. I did enjoy your poem. I like the positive message. I'm not one to socialize with my neighbors but my partner does quite often and I know it brings him joy and a sense of community. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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I have never written an abc poem. I did enjoy your poem. I like the positive message. I'm not one to socialize with my neighbors but my partner does quite often and I know it brings him joy and a sense of community. Nicely done.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Hello, thanks for your review. 3 stars means there are some things that need correcting/improving in the piece. Can you specify them, please, that I may improve it. You may read the contest prompt requirements/details, as well.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
I really appreciate the message. Reminds me of the volunteers at my last job. It's wonderful how you highlight the importance of engaging with your community and making meaningful connections. The lines about canvassing and chatting give a real sense of the effort and heart you're putting into this work. The final sentiment about seeing reflections in others and them seeing the same in you is touching and profound. If you're open to it, you might consider adding a bit more to that last line to deepen the connection you're describing. Overall, it's a great piece that beautifully captures the essence of giving back and connecting with others. Keep up the fantastic work!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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I really appreciate the message. Reminds me of the volunteers at my last job. It's wonderful how you highlight the importance of engaging with your community and making meaningful connections. The lines about canvassing and chatting give a real sense of the effort and heart you're putting into this work. The final sentiment about seeing reflections in others and them seeing the same in you is touching and profound. If you're open to it, you might consider adding a bit more to that last line to deepen the connection you're describing. Overall, it's a great piece that beautifully captures the essence of giving back and connecting with others. Keep up the fantastic work!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much for your very kind review!
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written is a very good idea to go out and meet your neighbors. In this day of age, it seems so many people are afraid to go out and meet their neighbors. Have a good evening and God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This is very well written is a very good idea to go out and meet your neighbors. In this day of age, it seems so many people are afraid to go out and meet their neighbors. Have a good evening and God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from BOO ghost
Yeah, read this is an ABC contest. Looks like ABC to BOO. Guess the Acrostic is a little different. Best of luck in this contest! They're not easy as pie to win! Maybe I will campaign in my neighborhood? Do some good! Nicely done! Bravos Perfecto!
BOO!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Yeah, read this is an ABC contest. Looks like ABC to BOO. Guess the Acrostic is a little different. Best of luck in this contest! They're not easy as pie to win! Maybe I will campaign in my neighborhood? Do some good! Nicely done! Bravos Perfecto!
BOO!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Haha! Love your pseudonym. :-)
Thank you so much for your kind review, BOO!
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Keep in touch! BOO!
