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Harris in Paris

Kamala faces a tough decision

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet, you now have 3 votes.m

The opening line explains everything.

Now I know what has been keeping Kamala's mind occupied: she has been thinking about all the great meals she could prepare with her French bought pot. Pp

When Biden took office , he assigned the southern border to Kamala , she was supposed to keep it in check.

Well on her watch 8 million illegals cross into your country, this caused big issues ..

.. with housing, to the health and education systems, employment

Crime went up , and cities are in degrade

The southern border is a mess,

I don't think she is the answer

PS : I didn't know about her trips to Paris !

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
    Yes, the irony is she did not get a lot of attention for being in Paris until the pot incident. One of my brothers was there and happened to see or hear what store she was going into, and after she had left, he visited in casually, inquired what she had purchased. In hopes of scoring another sale, the owner told him, hahaha. So that is how the story came out.
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Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
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Oh wow, your opening sentence is great, "Kamala faces a tough decision,"
and your catchy title, "Harris in Paris" is excellent. I enjoy reading your poem from top to bottom. I know anything about Politics is very difficult to write due to sensitive to both parties. Overall, your writing is awesome, and a 5 star view, and wish you the best! Oh, I do not have a 6 star option!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for the fine review and kind words!
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reply by iDri.Luv.Jesus on 29-Jul-2024
    Hi, you're so welcome and have a nice day!
Comment from bonespur
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This was a cleverly thought out little poem. For those of us that weren't familiar with her trip you did a great job of describing it. This is a good candidate for the contest. Good and good luck. Have a blessed day

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you Bonespur and glad you enjoyed!
reply by bonespur on 26-Jul-2024
    You're welcome