Storms
Life changes.2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Yeah. I can see the colors within the candle flickering light muted colors.
I'm trying to think of how I would show colors and it's hard to do. It's really hard to do.
Of course the darkness is lack of color. White is all colors combined as darkness is no color.
The candle flame has color around it, and just looking at the flame of the candle color itself
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Yeah. I can see the colors within the candle flickering light muted colors.
I'm trying to think of how I would show colors and it's hard to do. It's really hard to do.
Of course the darkness is lack of color. White is all colors combined as darkness is no color.
The candle flame has color around it, and just looking at the flame of the candle color itself
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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I appreciate your review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a nice spiritual poem about how finding the light of faith gets your through literal and figurative darkness and storms. The candle is a metaphor for the light of faith as well as light to see by.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Hi
This is a nice spiritual poem about how finding the light of faith gets your through literal and figurative darkness and storms. The candle is a metaphor for the light of faith as well as light to see by.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you for getting the association.
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You're welcome.
Joan