Clouds
Find the animals.12 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I still enjoy cloud watching and finding shapes in them. I've that a few times in my novels. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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I still enjoy cloud watching and finding shapes in them. I've that a few times in my novels. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi Barbara, Thanks for reading. It's a great meditation time. K xx
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This poem is so neat. I would like to attempt this kind of poetry. I'm not sure I'm that brave though. Good luck with this contest and happy writing! Such a beautiful poem!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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This poem is so neat. I would like to attempt this kind of poetry. I'm not sure I'm that brave though. Good luck with this contest and happy writing! Such a beautiful poem!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Hello Lindsey, Once you get the hang of last word is next word, it's very easy. I get a big thumbs up for readers who like it. There is a free contest for Loop poetry I think, have a go? K XX
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I'm gonna try! Lol! We'll see!
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If I can do it, so can you! I will be 79 in September. Love, Kay xx Don't forget the rhyme ABCB.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kace, when I used the go to Florida with my grandkids...
that was a game we played...each of us would take turns
picking out the shapes in the clouds...I miss those days...
I love your poem my beautiful friend...and I love your picture...
very nicely written sweetie pie...love much you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Hi Kace, when I used the go to Florida with my grandkids...
that was a game we played...each of us would take turns
picking out the shapes in the clouds...I miss those days...
I love your poem my beautiful friend...and I love your picture...
very nicely written sweetie pie...love much you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Hello Buddy, Good to see you back! Thanks for the sixer and glad you liked the poem. Love, Kace xx
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your so very welcome sweetie pie...
I hope your feeling better...I had a virus...knocked me off my feet for two weeks...stay warm...love much...Linda xxoo 🤗❤️🙏☕🌼
Comment from mermaids
I see many things in the clouds all the time, so your words are perfect for me. Usually I see animals, I have seen whales, dolphins and bettas but recently I observed a cloud shaped like Cape Cod where I live. I enjoyed this poem!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I see many things in the clouds all the time, so your words are perfect for me. Usually I see animals, I have seen whales, dolphins and bettas but recently I observed a cloud shaped like Cape Cod where I live. I enjoyed this poem!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Hello You, I have missed you online. One can see magic in the clouds. K XX 💖
Comment from lyenochka
You must be a nephophile (cloud-lover) like me! I enjoyed your looping poem that describes all the changes in the sky. You gave us the sky "movie" in your poem. Best wishes in the contest!
Dirt flys,real animals scatter, fear (Dirt flies?)
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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You must be a nephophile (cloud-lover) like me! I enjoyed your looping poem that describes all the changes in the sky. You gave us the sky "movie" in your poem. Best wishes in the contest!
Dirt flys,real animals scatter, fear (Dirt flies?)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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We step out of our human-self into our spiritual self. So we can see the beautiful animals etc. K xx
Comment from Heather Knight
I like the very beautiful and realistic descriptions in your poem, though I don't fully get why you describe it as spiritual. My bad, I'm sure.
I think there's a typo: flys should be flies.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I like the very beautiful and realistic descriptions in your poem, though I don't fully get why you describe it as spiritual. My bad, I'm sure.
I think there's a typo: flys should be flies.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Hi heather, I changed it to supernatural and flies instead of flys. Thanks for reading. K xx
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your poem took me back to childhood, when my sisters and I laid on the grass in our backyard. watching the clouds and pointing out what we saw. When a storm came, we ran in the house and watched lightning strikes from the kitchen window.
You did a marvelous job describing the marshmallow clouds and changes in the sky. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Your poem took me back to childhood, when my sisters and I laid on the grass in our backyard. watching the clouds and pointing out what we saw. When a storm came, we ran in the house and watched lightning strikes from the kitchen window.
You did a marvelous job describing the marshmallow clouds and changes in the sky. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Hello Little Butterfly. Many thanks for reading and I am glad you liked it. K XX
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is another of your lovely loop verses on your precious theme of nature imagined in those billowing clouds. I enjoyed the progress of the verse to its crescendo with Willy-Willy dancing in the dirt. And then the resumption of blue sky as the animals awaken from our dreams.
Small edit: dirt fl(ie)s.
A very pleasing and imaginative entry for the contest! Good Luck, Kay! Debbie xx
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This is another of your lovely loop verses on your precious theme of nature imagined in those billowing clouds. I enjoyed the progress of the verse to its crescendo with Willy-Willy dancing in the dirt. And then the resumption of blue sky as the animals awaken from our dreams.
Small edit: dirt fl(ie)s.
A very pleasing and imaginative entry for the contest! Good Luck, Kay! Debbie xx
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Hello Debbie, When we enter our spiritual side (like meditation) we can see all forms of nature and beyond. Bless you, K XX
Comment from June Sargent
I really enjoyed this parade of animals in the sky. Our imagination can create images of animals from a-z. With the blue sky as our canvas, there is no limit to what we can paint - until a storm moves in. Great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I really enjoyed this parade of animals in the sky. Our imagination can create images of animals from a-z. With the blue sky as our canvas, there is no limit to what we can paint - until a storm moves in. Great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Hello June, Thank you for reading my friend. Glad you enjoyed something different. K XX
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed reading what may go on the sky during a nice day when white puffy clouds seem to form shapes like animals. Then the picture changes as storm clouds gather and lightening flashes and rain falls but the storm passes and we're back to blue skies with whilte puffy clouds that looks like animals parading across the sky.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed reading what may go on the sky during a nice day when white puffy clouds seem to form shapes like animals. Then the picture changes as storm clouds gather and lightening flashes and rain falls but the storm passes and we're back to blue skies with whilte puffy clouds that looks like animals parading across the sky.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Beth, Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed something different. Cloud meditation. K xx