Changing Heart
What loneliness can do3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
In this contest entry I could feel the pain of a broken heart. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I can't say I enjoyed reading because of the pain felt. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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In this contest entry I could feel the pain of a broken heart. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I can't say I enjoyed reading because of the pain felt. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Pain must be felt no matter how devistating.
Comment from T.D. Hoitsma
I liked this a lot, my type of poetry. The imagery is strong and you truly feel it. its like the darkness has fully taken over and you can't escape it like being sucked into my your shadow self. Thanks for the read!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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I liked this a lot, my type of poetry. The imagery is strong and you truly feel it. its like the darkness has fully taken over and you can't escape it like being sucked into my your shadow self. Thanks for the read!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Catherine Deslippe
Jealousy really does this to us. How empty and angry one can feel. How the devil takes over all the goodness once felt. Written beautifully and describing it well. Thank you
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Jealousy really does this to us. How empty and angry one can feel. How the devil takes over all the goodness once felt. Written beautifully and describing it well. Thank you
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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So glad you enjoyed it.