Opportunism
A good man betrayed.2 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
This is an excellent entry for this particular writing prompt. Thank you for sharing, and best of luck in the contest votes.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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This is an excellent entry for this particular writing prompt. Thank you for sharing, and best of luck in the contest votes.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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And you, Steve. Thank you.
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My pleasure, Terry.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your 5-7-5 poem has a sharp and succinct style that delivers its message clearly. The use of "arras" adds a touch of historical or dramatic flair, which is interesting.
The metaphor of "stabbed Biden behind the arras" might be confusing for some readers. Clarifying this metaphor or choosing a more direct expression could enhance understanding. Maybe... Upset Biden's plans in secret.
Either way great job! Sincerely hope it's not true. Love Biden
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Your 5-7-5 poem has a sharp and succinct style that delivers its message clearly. The use of "arras" adds a touch of historical or dramatic flair, which is interesting.
The metaphor of "stabbed Biden behind the arras" might be confusing for some readers. Clarifying this metaphor or choosing a more direct expression could enhance understanding. Maybe... Upset Biden's plans in secret.
Either way great job! Sincerely hope it's not true. Love Biden
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Patty.