Unfinished Brushstrokes
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Unfinished Brushstrokes Chap 20"story of love, loss, new beginnings and secrets.
14 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
OMG, those poor girls. But the kidnappers don't know who THEY'RE dealing with. Lol. At least these girls won't be sold, if our gang get there in time!!
Those were really sad letters, I'm sure Dylan will pass this on to Charles. He'll be so upset! All those years. But what about the child Eleanor had? Charles child. Will he want to find her? So much happened, he will be so distraught! I think I have one more chapter to read. Thank goodness the next chapters will be on here soon. Well done, my very talented friend. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
  |
OMG, those poor girls. But the kidnappers don't know who THEY'RE dealing with. Lol. At least these girls won't be sold, if our gang get there in time!!
Those were really sad letters, I'm sure Dylan will pass this on to Charles. He'll be so upset! All those years. But what about the child Eleanor had? Charles child. Will he want to find her? So much happened, he will be so distraught! I think I have one more chapter to read. Thank goodness the next chapters will be on here soon. Well done, my very talented friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
-
I've posted through Chapter 23...
I wanted to express the emotions I think they would have been feeling when written. I hope those feelings came through. I am glad that you felt those vibes.
So much more is about to happen....
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Oh dear that was an ominous chapter all way round. No good news on any front. What on earth is to become of Megan is anyone's guess. It doesn't look good. A big hug, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
|
Oh dear that was an ominous chapter all way round. No good news on any front. What on earth is to become of Megan is anyone's guess. It doesn't look good. A big hug, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
-
Ulla, you are not suppose to read the chapters backwards. Reminds me when my daughter (a lefty) learned to write in school she wrote everything from right to left... oh boy! Good news is on its way and I hope you love the finish. It got an extra chapter when I was trying to end it but that's to be expected from this author. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
I was wondering if Charles and Eleanor had a child together. I don't suppose it could be Jenna, who perhaps grew up as someone else's daughter? Just a random thought - but then she would be cousin to Dylan, so perhaps best not. we want them to get together!
Oh dear, what a terrible chapter for these girls. it seems that Nick's ramblings will be ignored, and the girls' fate left hanging, as they are seemingly all chained and blindfolded. (Should you therefore describe Sarah?)
Well done! Very enjoyable read.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
|
I was wondering if Charles and Eleanor had a child together. I don't suppose it could be Jenna, who perhaps grew up as someone else's daughter? Just a random thought - but then she would be cousin to Dylan, so perhaps best not. we want them to get together!
Oh dear, what a terrible chapter for these girls. it seems that Nick's ramblings will be ignored, and the girls' fate left hanging, as they are seemingly all chained and blindfolded. (Should you therefore describe Sarah?)
Well done! Very enjoyable read.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
-
I need to go back and adjust that part about the blindfold. In my mind it was just the writer describe the scene but I guess most took it as Megan's point of view. I never get that stuff right! thank you so much Wendy. The story is reving up to wrap up. Hope you enjoy it to the end.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
So, clung to a life raft, feeling lost at sea, Moby Dick in the room, and Charlie Tuna chumming the waters. Megan and the girls shark bait. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
|
So, clung to a life raft, feeling lost at sea, Moby Dick in the room, and Charlie Tuna chumming the waters. Megan and the girls shark bait. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
-
You are something else, my friend! I can see you have that evil brain of yours working in high gear today. Thank you for the chuckle!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Jenna reads some of Eleanor's war letters to Dylan and they learn about the romance. Nick may be trying to save Megan, who is chained up and blindfolded in what sounds like a ship or warehouse. On problem: You have given physical descriptions of one or two girls, but Megan can't see them because of her blindfold.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
|
Jenna reads some of Eleanor's war letters to Dylan and they learn about the romance. Nick may be trying to save Megan, who is chained up and blindfolded in what sounds like a ship or warehouse. On problem: You have given physical descriptions of one or two girls, but Megan can't see them because of her blindfold.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
-
Thanks for the review and comments. I'm thankful that someone keeps me on my toes. I don't know if Nick will survive or not but his subconscious is trying to help Megan or maybe its payback to the judge.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
Well written, like always, but small detail needs to be fixed. They are blind-folded and Sarah is an older willowy brunette. "a willowy brunette". I have a true story about rescuing sex slaves. Your story is stirring thoughts. Esther
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
|
Well written, like always, but small detail needs to be fixed. They are blind-folded and Sarah is an older willowy brunette. "a willowy brunette". I have a true story about rescuing sex slaves. Your story is stirring thoughts. Esther
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
-
I can't begin to imagine anyone doing something so horrible to another human being but I guess when you are evil and wicked you forget that these are people. Thanks for reading as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Great that Dylan and Jenna could share those secrets written so long ago. Perhaps the two of them will become an item and fulfill the love Eleanor and Charles couldn't have. Hope they find Eleanor and Charles' baby!
There's hope for a change in Nick. And Sarah seems to be a good leader for the captured girls.
One question:
I was surprised at this sentence "Their chance of finding Megan slipped away." The nurse just left Nick. Would she know about Megan?
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
|
Great that Dylan and Jenna could share those secrets written so long ago. Perhaps the two of them will become an item and fulfill the love Eleanor and Charles couldn't have. Hope they find Eleanor and Charles' baby!
There's hope for a change in Nick. And Sarah seems to be a good leader for the captured girls.
One question:
I was surprised at this sentence "Their chance of finding Megan slipped away." The nurse just left Nick. Would she know about Megan?
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
-
I guess I should say for the moment...meaning he tried to tell them but no one paid attention to his babbling.
thanks so much for the comments and suggestions. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
My mind is racing. Wildly! Could Dylan be Elanor's love child with Charles?
Maybe not a nephew but a secret? (I know with you anything is possible!)
You've demonstrated the sex trafficking ring very effectively. Oh my. There are so many people to worry about and I'm comforted ONLY by the fact that YOU are the author and Eleanor and Garth are your creations...so it's all got to turn out okay!
Yikes!
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
|
My mind is racing. Wildly! Could Dylan be Elanor's love child with Charles?
Maybe not a nephew but a secret? (I know with you anything is possible!)
You've demonstrated the sex trafficking ring very effectively. Oh my. There are so many people to worry about and I'm comforted ONLY by the fact that YOU are the author and Eleanor and Garth are your creations...so it's all got to turn out okay!
Yikes!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
-
I am so tired at the moment, but you still manage to make me smile and want to keep going. There's so much more that I want to share in this story, but some things do have to end....at least by July 31sr. LOL
Smiles and hugs, sweet lady!
Always with love, CArol
-
Take a breather. Break out the Merlot!
(Or beverage of your choice)-- You've got this think in the bag. And I've got my pom poms out ready to cheer you to the finish line!
Comment from royowen
So, Megan is being trafficked as other girls are that she's with, so Doyle is more of a sleeze than what I first thought, it's going to take some doing to get these girls out of trouble, also the letters that Eleanor told of her love for Charles, the truth is coming out now, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
|
So, Megan is being trafficked as other girls are that she's with, so Doyle is more of a sleeze than what I first thought, it's going to take some doing to get these girls out of trouble, also the letters that Eleanor told of her love for Charles, the truth is coming out now, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
-
Yes, there's so much more unfolding...just a little at a time. Jenna and Dylan are learning things Eleanor never shared.... More to come!
Smiles, Carol
-
Well done
Comment from LJbutterfly
The story of Eleanor and Charles is a powerful love story. Based on the love story in your last novel, I see you are a romantic at heart. I'm glad Dylan will be able to tell his uncle how much Eleanor loved him.
Now that he's beat to a pulp, it seems like Nick is afraid and willing to talk.
Hopefully, Megan is found quickly, or she will be sold as a sex toy never to be found.
This story is riveting, with many moving parts. I look forward to reading how you pull all the parts together.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
|
The story of Eleanor and Charles is a powerful love story. Based on the love story in your last novel, I see you are a romantic at heart. I'm glad Dylan will be able to tell his uncle how much Eleanor loved him.
Now that he's beat to a pulp, it seems like Nick is afraid and willing to talk.
Hopefully, Megan is found quickly, or she will be sold as a sex toy never to be found.
This story is riveting, with many moving parts. I look forward to reading how you pull all the parts together.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
-
I'm trying. Not sure if Nick is talking from his subconscious state or if he's aware of what he's telling people. Haven't thought it out completley. If he survives he would make an excellent witness.
Smiles, Carol