Rekindling?
Are there still feelings that will rekindle?2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was such a wonderful poem for the "5-7-5 romance" prompt. It reminds me of a love I had once upon a time (and again not too long ago). You also got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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This was such a wonderful poem for the "5-7-5 romance" prompt. It reminds me of a love I had once upon a time (and again not too long ago). You also got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your read and your comments. Hope all works out well for you.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your 5-7-5 poem beautifully captures the essence of looking back on high school days and wondering about the potential for renewed love. I love how "Decades melt away" sets a nostalgic tone, and "Echoing of high school days" creates a vivid sense of past memories. The question "Will love bloom again?" is a powerful and hopeful note that resonates deeply. If you want to enhance it further, maybe consider adding a bit more detail to draw the reader in even more. Overall, it's a touching and reflective piece that really made me think about the passage of time and the possibilities of rekindled love.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Your 5-7-5 poem beautifully captures the essence of looking back on high school days and wondering about the potential for renewed love. I love how "Decades melt away" sets a nostalgic tone, and "Echoing of high school days" creates a vivid sense of past memories. The question "Will love bloom again?" is a powerful and hopeful note that resonates deeply. If you want to enhance it further, maybe consider adding a bit more detail to draw the reader in even more. Overall, it's a touching and reflective piece that really made me think about the passage of time and the possibilities of rekindled love.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your thoughtful response to my haiku. Deeply appreciated. I think that first love may still resonate with many of us.