Bethany's Gaze
A poem about missed connections.6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Adults tend to have many misconceptions about many things. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Adults tend to have many misconceptions about many things. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Children have some kind of sixth sense as they recognise danger and those who are not so good. I enjoyed your intuitive words here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Children have some kind of sixth sense as they recognise danger and those who are not so good. I enjoyed your intuitive words here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your piece beautifully captures the charm and innocence of Bethany Bright. The vivid imagery of her dimpled smile and pearl-like eye creates a strong emotional connection. The contrast between her innocent appearance and the underlying disdain adds depth to the narrative, making it both engaging and thought-provoking. The lyrical quality of your writing enhances its impact, drawing the reader into Bethany's world. Overall, it's a compelling portrayal with a poignant twist.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Your piece beautifully captures the charm and innocence of Bethany Bright. The vivid imagery of her dimpled smile and pearl-like eye creates a strong emotional connection. The contrast between her innocent appearance and the underlying disdain adds depth to the narrative, making it both engaging and thought-provoking. The lyrical quality of your writing enhances its impact, drawing the reader into Bethany's world. Overall, it's a compelling portrayal with a poignant twist.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!! I'm happy you like it🙂
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful ABC poem about a blind in one eye girl ignored by passerby. I like the juxtaposition between a real blind eye and 'turn a blind eye' phrase.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Beautiful ABC poem about a blind in one eye girl ignored by passerby. I like the juxtaposition between a real blind eye and 'turn a blind eye' phrase.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from Lindsey Russell
I really like this just because I like works that can be interpreted differently by different people. Keep on writing and sharing with this community. Happy writing!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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I really like this just because I like works that can be interpreted differently by different people. Keep on writing and sharing with this community. Happy writing!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you! That was the plan and I'm so happy that you liked it🙂
Comment from royowen
An excellent ABC poem that is great in presentation and application, plus it has a very quirky theme, I'm assuming that it's fiction, even more compelling, well done, great post, good icky, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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An excellent ABC poem that is great in presentation and application, plus it has a very quirky theme, I'm assuming that it's fiction, even more compelling, well done, great post, good icky, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
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Welcome