Rekindled
A old romance...6 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is quite poignant actually. It has a nice twist to it that the reader will be given cause to pause. It said that the strongest trigger for memory is the sense of smell. This was handled well.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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This is quite poignant actually. It has a nice twist to it that the reader will be given cause to pause. It said that the strongest trigger for memory is the sense of smell. This was handled well.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you, l appreciate it very much. :)
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A clever and romantic little story fitting into your 75 word prompt. The sense of smell can be a powerful trigger for memory and Sara had never been forgotten. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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A clever and romantic little story fitting into your 75 word prompt. The sense of smell can be a powerful trigger for memory and Sara had never been forgotten. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you, that means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-five-word poem, Rekindled, has the proper word count and captures a reunion for the record books, when both parties have lost something important, but not their affection.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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This seventy-five-word poem, Rekindled, has the proper word count and captures a reunion for the record books, when both parties have lost something important, but not their affection.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you, l appreciate this nice review.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This flash fiction piece poignantly captures a moment of reunion and recognition. The narrative effectively conveys deep emotion with its brief yet impactful dialogue and subtle details. The use of perfume as a motif to signify enduring love is both touching and evocative. For slight improvement, consider adding a bit more detail about the characters' past to enhance the emotional weight of their reunion. Overall, it's a moving and well-crafted story of love and recognition.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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This flash fiction piece poignantly captures a moment of reunion and recognition. The narrative effectively conveys deep emotion with its brief yet impactful dialogue and subtle details. The use of perfume as a motif to signify enduring love is both touching and evocative. For slight improvement, consider adding a bit more detail about the characters' past to enhance the emotional weight of their reunion. Overall, it's a moving and well-crafted story of love and recognition.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much for this great review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is filled with romance and love and I enjoyed the sentiments, few words to tell a story of long lasting love and we never forget some encounters, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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This is filled with romance and love and I enjoyed the sentiments, few words to tell a story of long lasting love and we never forget some encounters, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Irs so nice to hear from you, l really appreciate thus great review. :)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt. What a sweet story. We learn everything we need to know in the 75 words and then we get the surprise twist at the end that we expect in flash fiction. Very nice.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt. What a sweet story. We learn everything we need to know in the 75 words and then we get the surprise twist at the end that we expect in flash fiction. Very nice.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you so lmuch.