Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Joan,
Nice 75 word entry.
In 75 words, you write your take on America's destruction.
I like the way you show how terrible things can be if we don't heed warnings. Global warming, is another way America may fall if we don't heed warnings....
Excellent poem, Joan
Best wishes, Cindy

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024

Thank you for the great review, Cindy. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Yes, we definitely need to pay attention. Have yourself a great day.

It's Ron by the way, not Joan.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
I have often thought that we might be in the End Times which your story seems to state. Luckily this didn't effect my home or work;
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Good luck in the contest
Joan

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024

Thank you for the great review and stars, Joan.

reply by dragonpoet on 22-Jul-2024

You're welcome on both accounts.
Joan

reply by dragonpoet on 22-Jul-2024

No problem

Comment from Samantha Wymer

Excellent

I love your poem. Every word is the truth. There is nonsense in the truth. Your absolutely right when you said it's coming, because it is. Thank you for sharing with us all on Fanstory.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024

Thank you for the great review, Samantha. Yes, it is.

Comment from Lindsey Russell

Excellent

To me, this piece is amazing! Our society is very reliant on technology. It may be our downfall. You are talented. Good job. Thanks for sharing and happy writing.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024

Thank you for the great review, Lindsey. I appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. Om glad you liked the piece.