Hearing Test
75 word Flash Fiction24 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hahaha, Beth, I loved it. You're turning this right on its head. What a lovely entry this is for the contest. I'm sure it will do very well. I simply loved it. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Hahaha, Beth, I loved it. You're turning this right on its head. What a lovely entry this is for the contest. I'm sure it will do very well. I simply loved it. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you Ulla, I'm so glad you got a laugh out of my 75 word flash. Beth
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This story is engaging and humorous, highlighting a common marital scenario with a clever twist. The build-up to the punchline is effective, leading to a humorous revelation that Charles's wife was not the one with the hearing problem.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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This story is engaging and humorous, highlighting a common marital scenario with a clever twist. The build-up to the punchline is effective, leading to a humorous revelation that Charles's wife was not the one with the hearing problem.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you Patty. I so glad you like this.
Beth
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhh! Now THAT's funny!! I was NOT expecting that perfect twist!! Hahaha. I have a hunch this is going to do GREAT in the 75 Words Flash Fiction Contest!! Good luck. xo
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Ohhh! Now THAT's funny!! I was NOT expecting that perfect twist!! Hahaha. I have a hunch this is going to do GREAT in the 75 Words Flash Fiction Contest!! Good luck. xo
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you Rachelle. I'm glad you like the twist.
Beth
Comment from jim vecchio
I didn't expect that ending. Very well done. Wishing you the best in the contest. You not only do great on your longer works, but you have excelled also on the shorter works such as this.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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I didn't expect that ending. Very well done. Wishing you the best in the contest. You not only do great on your longer works, but you have excelled also on the shorter works such as this.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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Thank you Jim. I glad the ending was a surprise. I appreciater the review.
Beth
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I have faith in your writing. And Faith cometh by hearing.
Comment from jessizero
This piece of flash fiction was hilarious! I like that you flipped it on its head. I definitely didn't see that last line coming! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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This piece of flash fiction was hilarious! I like that you flipped it on its head. I definitely didn't see that last line coming! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank y ou Jessi. I'm so glad you liked it and found it funny.
Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is hilarious Beth and you made me smile with this clever post and I wish you luck with the contest, this is a good entry. A fun post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Ha ha ha, this is hilarious Beth and you made me smile with this clever post and I wish you luck with the contest, this is a good entry. A fun post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you Dolly. I'm glad you got a laugh. I really appreciate the six stars.
Beth
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You deserve them Beth x x x
Comment from karenina
Hah! This is hysterical! I tried to imagine where you were going with this flash and you still caught me unaware! Somebody needs a hearing test...but it's not the wife!
This should do great in the contest!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Hah! This is hysterical! I tried to imagine where you were going with this flash and you still caught me unaware! Somebody needs a hearing test...but it's not the wife!
This should do great in the contest!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you Karenina. I glad the ending came as a surprise. Thanks for the review and comments.
Beth
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Spitfire
What a twist. I didn't see it coming. You know how to tell a cute story. This is one that a lot of writers on this site can connect to. So far, I can hear pretty good.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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What a twist. I didn't see it coming. You know how to tell a cute story. This is one that a lot of writers on this site can connect to. So far, I can hear pretty good.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you for a great review. I can relate. I'm having problems hearing if there is backgrown noise.
Beth
Comment from Wendy G
I think I've heard or seen that one or a similar one before, but it doesn't matter as I still enjoyed it. It fits well into the 75 word format, and many people will relate well to it. Thanks for sharing and best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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I think I've heard or seen that one or a similar one before, but it doesn't matter as I still enjoyed it. It fits well into the 75 word format, and many people will relate well to it. Thanks for sharing and best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you Wendy. I remember hearing something a bit like it and thought it was funny. I'm pretty sure what I heard or read was a longer story, and I tried to adapt it and cut it down to size. I hope my version is different enough.
Comment from patcelaw
Very well written fiction and I enjoyed it very much. Your presentation is really good. I wish you the very best in the contest and may God bless you. Have a good weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Very well written fiction and I enjoyed it very much. Your presentation is really good. I wish you the very best in the contest and may God bless you. Have a good weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you Patricia. I'm glad you liked my flash. I always enjoy your comments.
Beth
