Pretty Butterfly
Butterfly7 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Lisa,
Your first poem is really nice. It can be symbolic of waiting for a love or a friend.
Nice photo.
I hope you enjoy Fanstory. It's a pretty nice site for friendship and writing.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Lisa,
Your first poem is really nice. It can be symbolic of waiting for a love or a friend.
Nice photo.
I hope you enjoy Fanstory. It's a pretty nice site for friendship and writing.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST MILESTONE POST!!!!!!!! I want to be here for your thousand and first! You should have entered this in the
5-7-5 contest. I always enjoy viewing the butterflies on the grounds of my assisted living situation.
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CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST MILESTONE POST!!!!!!!! I want to be here for your thousand and first! You should have entered this in the
5-7-5 contest. I always enjoy viewing the butterflies on the grounds of my assisted living situation.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Butterflies are a perfect example of beautiful. Thank you for sharing your first milestone post with us. This is an excellent example of your talent. Pat, Patcelaw, was right. You're good.
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Butterflies are a perfect example of beautiful. Thank you for sharing your first milestone post with us. This is an excellent example of your talent. Pat, Patcelaw, was right. You're good.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
Hello, Lisa. Welcome to Fanstory. This 5-7-5, Pretty Butterfly, has the proper formatting and makes this reader wonder whether this meeting is with a friend, an insect, or an establishment.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Hello, Lisa. Welcome to Fanstory. This 5-7-5, Pretty Butterfly, has the proper formatting and makes this reader wonder whether this meeting is with a friend, an insect, or an establishment.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your kindness
Comment from patcelaw
Congratulations on your first milestone post. I am proud of you and I am glad that you enjoy writing poetry. I hope you will continue to write as often as you're able to. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I hope that you will have a few minutes each day to be able to post or even review some others work.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Congratulations on your first milestone post. I am proud of you and I am glad that you enjoy writing poetry. I hope you will continue to write as often as you're able to. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I hope that you will have a few minutes each day to be able to post or even review some others work.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your kindness
Comment from lyenochka
I guess the "pretty butterfly" is symbolic of a loved one. Sometimes, people say a butterfly is a sign that someone who has died is greeting you. I like the final line that shows it's more than a butterfly.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I guess the "pretty butterfly" is symbolic of a loved one. Sometimes, people say a butterfly is a sign that someone who has died is greeting you. I like the final line that shows it's more than a butterfly.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you for reviewing this poem and for your comments it greatly is appreciated❤️
Comment from Lindsey Russell
There is quite a bit of emotion conveyed in this poem with so few words. Anticipation and longing are just two of them. This poem shows so much promise and talent. A great first post. Welcome to the community!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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There is quite a bit of emotion conveyed in this poem with so few words. Anticipation and longing are just two of them. This poem shows so much promise and talent. A great first post. Welcome to the community!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you Lindsay for meeting me here and helping me grow on this site. Have a wonderful day❤️