Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

I think I've seen some previous posts of yours one on the use of the subjunctive verbs

I agree with you I think format is fine when you're writing a novel but when you're writing poetry, more important is the emotion. Of course you don't want to completely throw your grammar away and you want to pause at times with commas when pausing between two sentences.

Other than that,as you
say. let it fly

I enjoyed reading your story

Good job. Thank

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

Many thanks. Have a good day.

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Haha, you and I, opposite universes! Lol!
I find grammar exhilarating and I read books about it for fun. It makes my heart pound with excitement .
I was required to read Ulysses while at summer school at Cambridge a long time ago. I would rate it the worst book I've ever had to read. See, opposites!
But I really enjoyed your entry and I love that everyone is different and individual. How boring if we were all the same.
Julie

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024

Thank you. Julie.