Comment from Samantha Wymer

Excellent

Great writing! I don't fully understand the 5-7-5 poem, but this gives me a step in the right direction to learn. Excellent poem. Thank you.
Much love, Sam

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024

Thank you, Sam, for your kind review. Have a great day.

reply by Samantha Wymer on 21-Jul-2024

Anytime 😊

reply by Samantha Wymer on 21-Jul-2024

Your welcome

Comment from F. William Lester

Excellent

I like this one. It really makes me feel at home and safe with my loved one. You used a great visual to bring out the warm tones. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024

Thanks for these kind words and for your good wishes. Have a great day.

reply by F. William Lester on 20-Jul-2024

You're very welcome.

Comment from Lindsey Russell

Excellent

I love this poem. It's so descriptive using so few words. Good job with it! Good luck with the contest and with all the rest of your writing journey. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024

Thank you, Lindsey, for taking the time to review my poem and tell me how much you enjoyed it.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This seems to be a great entry to the "5-7-5 poem" writing prompt. You got the syllable count right, and the message was lovely. The poem has a cozy feel to it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024

Thank you, Jessi, for your kind words about my poem. I am glad you enjoyed it.