Prelude
A night of love begins5 total reviews
Comment from F. William Lester
The artwork you chose, and your poem together paint a very steamy liaison. My aging ticker is working overtime. :) Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Stay well.f
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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The artwork you chose, and your poem together paint a very steamy liaison. My aging ticker is working overtime. :) Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Stay well.f
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Many thanks.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Catherine Deslippe
Beautifully written. A love poem or words whispered, usually hard to combine two. You did it perfectly. Thank you,I really enjoyed reading it and the art work fits it perfectly.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Beautifully written. A love poem or words whispered, usually hard to combine two. You did it perfectly. Thank you,I really enjoyed reading it and the art work fits it perfectly.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Lovely review, Catherine. Many thanks.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Prelude, has the proper formatting and says all that needs to be said, although, if she was waiting in the sack for me, I would just assume she needed me -- NOW!!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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This 5-7-5, Prelude, has the proper formatting and says all that needs to be said, although, if she was waiting in the sack for me, I would just assume she needed me -- NOW!!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Cheers, Bill. Your approach sounds like a recipe for premature emasculation.
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a great entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. I enjoyed your rhymes, and you got the syllable count right. I don't think you really needed the disclaimer, but I know it's better to err on the side of caution. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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I think this was a great entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. I enjoyed your rhymes, and you got the syllable count right. I don't think you really needed the disclaimer, but I know it's better to err on the side of caution. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Many thanks.
Comment from papa55mike
Those are the words every spouse longs to hear from a loving wife. I don't see the warning. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Those are the words every spouse longs to hear from a loving wife. I don't see the warning. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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So kind, Mike. Thank you.