Infatuated
a 5-7-59 total reviews
Comment from F. William Lester
OMG! That's a new definition for me. The picture says it all. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing your poem. Stay well and have a great day.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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OMG! That's a new definition for me. The picture says it all. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing your poem. Stay well and have a great day.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you, FW
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile, a fun post and this guy loves his pie and it is evident in his appearance! I love that you used the word inFATuated, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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This made me smile, a fun post and this guy loves his pie and it is evident in his appearance! I love that you used the word inFATuated, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Colorado Owl
Very well done! This poem is funny, but then I look at the picture and I no longer smile :-(
Excellent word play. Good to you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Very well done! This poem is funny, but then I look at the picture and I no longer smile :-(
Excellent word play. Good to you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you, CO
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem writing prompt. LOL This is a perfect definition of the word. I can also get infatuated with potatoes and pasta but that's for another poem. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem writing prompt. LOL This is a perfect definition of the word. I can also get infatuated with potatoes and pasta but that's for another poem. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn
Comment from bonespur
This seems to be a good candidate for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. Your syllable count is right. I would have given you 5 stars, but personally, I find the picture you chose offensive and it completely took me away from the poem. Good luck and have a blessed day
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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This seems to be a good candidate for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. Your syllable count is right. I would have given you 5 stars, but personally, I find the picture you chose offensive and it completely took me away from the poem. Good luck and have a blessed day
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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I found it offensive too. That is why it is there.
Comment from Julie G1
So well expressed. This verse expressed a great response to the prompt. The poet has chosen great imagery and apt language, enhanced by the slightly humorous graphic, adding to the overall realistic effect. Worked well for this reader.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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So well expressed. This verse expressed a great response to the prompt. The poet has chosen great imagery and apt language, enhanced by the slightly humorous graphic, adding to the overall realistic effect. Worked well for this reader.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Julie
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
You are clever. Yes, that is the definition of infatuated.
I can't do that anymore since I'm diabetic. I could do it and then give myself more insulin but insulin in and of itself is a poison even though it's something you need. Too much is not good
It's hard to say much in these tiny poems, and even harder to review them
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
You are clever. Yes, that is the definition of infatuated.
I can't do that anymore since I'm diabetic. I could do it and then give myself more insulin but insulin in and of itself is a poison even though it's something you need. Too much is not good
It's hard to say much in these tiny poems, and even harder to review them
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Pam. None of us can still do what we did before. (Dang it!)
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This poem is great. It's so funny. Who knew a definition is the beginnings of a good poem. Thank you for sharing. Good luck with the contest and happy writing!!!!!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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This poem is great. It's so funny. Who knew a definition is the beginnings of a good poem. Thank you for sharing. Good luck with the contest and happy writing!!!!!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Lindsey
Comment from papa55mike
I don't know about candy and pie, but I can chow down some ice cream with the best. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the play on words. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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I don't know about candy and pie, but I can chow down some ice cream with the best. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the play on words. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Mike, for the kind review.
