When do you know?
A poem about when you know you're in love4 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I know you shouldn't end a sentence with "at," but it works here because of the sentiments and rhyme. I enjoyed this poem about how you know when you're in love. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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I know you shouldn't end a sentence with "at," but it works here because of the sentiments and rhyme. I enjoyed this poem about how you know when you're in love. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank-you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a blessed day
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written and very good advice for people when it comes to finding love. When I'm at my husband, the very first day that I met him I knew he was a man that I could love, but I didn't know whether he could love me. But it turns out that he was just as interested in me as I was interested in him. Patricia.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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This is beautifully written and very good advice for people when it comes to finding love. When I'm at my husband, the very first day that I met him I knew he was a man that I could love, but I didn't know whether he could love me. But it turns out that he was just as interested in me as I was interested in him. Patricia.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank-you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a blessed day
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, bonespur
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I absolutely love the abstract image you found. Where did you get it from?
Your questioning when you know, you're in love. There are two ways to look at this.
The first way is how you were talking about you were talking about your partner doing certain things that made you realize you were in love
The other way, is you doing certain things because you love her
I found no mistakes in this poem. I had a good rhyming scheme. It flowed well. You are to be commended.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Hi, bonespur
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I absolutely love the abstract image you found. Where did you get it from?
Your questioning when you know, you're in love. There are two ways to look at this.
The first way is how you were talking about you were talking about your partner doing certain things that made you realize you were in love
The other way, is you doing certain things because you love her
I found no mistakes in this poem. I had a good rhyming scheme. It flowed well. You are to be commended.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. My husband died almost 6 years ago so I really didn't want to do a poem about already being in love so I went this route. Have a blessed day
Comment from CornishChick
This is highly creative and sweet. Love the first stanza and last stanza the best, but it's all great. It made me - the reader- smile. That's the goal!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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This is highly creative and sweet. Love the first stanza and last stanza the best, but it's all great. It made me - the reader- smile. That's the goal!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. My husband died almost 6 years ago so I really didn't want to do a poem about already being in love so I went this route. Have a blessed day
