Drums of Peace
We have lost our humanity.3 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
Ciao Amica tempeste: You caught my attention with this posting because it is so relative to the situation at hand. I agree with you 100%. We have lost our humanity. Reading your wee poem I thought: Wars wars wars wars, What on earth is going on here?! Well...first off...I've found that...wars are homemade. See: James chapter #4 and at verses #1 through verse #5. I thank you for your sharing, my friend. Thank You Amica tempeste. Take Care! Keep Safe! God Bless you.
Your friend...me.
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Ciao Amica tempeste: You caught my attention with this posting because it is so relative to the situation at hand. I agree with you 100%. We have lost our humanity. Reading your wee poem I thought: Wars wars wars wars, What on earth is going on here?! Well...first off...I've found that...wars are homemade. See: James chapter #4 and at verses #1 through verse #5. I thank you for your sharing, my friend. Thank You Amica tempeste. Take Care! Keep Safe! God Bless you.
Your friend...me.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
Comment from jessizero
Your rhymes worked well in your favor, and you got the syllable counts right. All in all, this was a great and effective nonet poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Your rhymes worked well in your favor, and you got the syllable counts right. All in all, this was a great and effective nonet poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed your poem. I thought your words share hope. I also enjoyed the message about the desire for a better world. The descent in the line structure, leading to the final word "please" was so perfect. Great job on sharing such a positive poem.
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I enjoyed your poem. I thought your words share hope. I also enjoyed the message about the desire for a better world. The descent in the line structure, leading to the final word "please" was so perfect. Great job on sharing such a positive poem.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024