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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "I told him,he shoulda listened"Nefarious Deeds
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Karen,
well, I see that having a relationship with you could prove to be dangerous. Your mind seems to work overtime in thoughtful ways to eradicate persons of the opposite sex. This was funny gal. Well done.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Hello Karen,
well, I see that having a relationship with you could prove to be dangerous. Your mind seems to work overtime in thoughtful ways to eradicate persons of the opposite sex. This was funny gal. Well done.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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It is legal and fun for me.I am upset about going back to Houston to empty my storage units so many feelings and memories. This saturday. So men get killed. Here. :-)
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Oh my, I hope you have someone to help you get your stuff gal. Be careful.
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My two sisters A grandson of my sister Tammy and her best friends son, and my sister in law when I get there.
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Oh, good! It's nice to have help.
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I need to exit now, My body is screaming at me. Karen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, something seems to tell me what there are a few people you'd like to get rid of, since you always write about it. LOL. I don't want to kill anyone, but I'd like to torture a few. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Yes, something seems to tell me what there are a few people you'd like to get rid of, since you always write about it. LOL. I don't want to kill anyone, but I'd like to torture a few. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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I will not illegally kill anyone. But if looks or words would kill there would be piles. :-)
Comment from Sanku
So you have successfully disposed one more hateful person in your imagination! Very hard hitting flash fiction. Problem solved and money received.. all the best for the contest..
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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So you have successfully disposed one more hateful person in your imagination! Very hard hitting flash fiction. Problem solved and money received.. all the best for the contest..
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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aren't you the sweetest thing ever? Thank you for the read, you go back on my review list. I read them in order. :-)
Comment from karenina
I'm thinking that one reason that you haven't been hauled into prison for manslaughter is A) Because you are SO clever you haven't been caught (yet) or B) Writing off these men is a great therapeutic catharsis and keeps you from doing the "real" deed.
I'm going with "B" -- It's much funnier that way!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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I'm thinking that one reason that you haven't been hauled into prison for manslaughter is A) Because you are SO clever you haven't been caught (yet) or B) Writing off these men is a great therapeutic catharsis and keeps you from doing the "real" deed.
I'm going with "B" -- It's much funnier that way!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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I whack them with zeal. I can torture them. I have simply oodles of ideas all legal on the page.
In real life,unless it was life or death of another, I don't think I could. On that light note, I have a contest for who writes the best birthday card for me. Two stanzas or more, In the limerick style, meter is not required like:
I made a cake just for her,
And boy did it create quite the stir
it was 7ft tall
and that was not all
The man inside wore a loincloth of fur
Anything you like Pretty Please
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Oh! Wow.
I don't do contests, normally...
No promises, but I'll try to channel the muse!
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I haven't celebrated a birthday in years. All my family had moved away and my husband pretended I didn't exist. This is a big deal for me. I am soooo ecited like a kid at Christmas.
I am not going to politely fold the paper, I am going to rip that stuff apart!!!!! Like I am seven. :-)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Your stories she to be a little heavy on knocking off the lazy idiots. You do a really good job of turning a simple situation into something amusing and rather unforgettable.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Your stories she to be a little heavy on knocking off the lazy idiots. You do a really good job of turning a simple situation into something amusing and rather unforgettable.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Well, I am a tiny bit ashamed to admit that I truly enjoy legally killing off menfolk. I could spend all day listing adjectives describing my negative reactions to men. I have loved some, I have admired some. But as a group, not so much. Off soap box now. I don't drink coffee. I love the smell though. My husbands all said I made great coffee. They all drank it black. My form of caffeine is Cherry Coke Zero. I need it first thing in the morning. They tried to de-caf coke. That was as popular as a turd on top of of a chocolate cake. We need our fix. Thanks for the read and sweet comments. And, remember you are never lost, because no matter where you go, there you are. Food for thought. :-)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well this fitted neatly into the 75 word flash! Another day, another killing. Well, no, he did it to himself. And he obviously deserved it! Well done on this clearly expressed little story that can't help but leave the reader with a smile on their face. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Well this fitted neatly into the 75 word flash! Another day, another killing. Well, no, he did it to himself. And he obviously deserved it! Well done on this clearly expressed little story that can't help but leave the reader with a smile on their face. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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I don't drink coffee. I love the smell though. My husbands all said I made great coffee. They all drank it black. My form of caffeine is Cherry Coke Zero. I need it first thing in the morning. They tried to de-caf coke. That was as popular as a turd on top of of a chocolate cake. We need our fix. Thanks for the read and sweet comments. And, remember you are never lost, because no matter where you go, there you are. Food for thought. :-)
Comment from lyenochka
That sounds like a booby trap. I don't know if any lawyer could get the narrator out of this one. Still now sure who the "he" is. Maybe not the maintenance dude.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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That sounds like a booby trap. I don't know if any lawyer could get the narrator out of this one. Still now sure who the "he" is. Maybe not the maintenance dude.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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her ner' do well husband. She told him many times in front of people that it had to be fixed or one of them would be electrocuted one day. If the story were more than 75 words you would know that. karen
Comment from GoWiSt
"It was shocking!" Baby, it always is.
"He shoulda listened" But you're so boringly nagging. Don't blame him.
"I left the cooler on top of the dryer and ran it." Which 'it', the cooler or the dryer? Yes, there are electric coolers, if you must know.
But why was he a 'bad boy'? Yes, you've told him about your electrical issues, but YOU put the running cooler/dryer on--YOU! That insurance company should investigate--long and hard!
Mom's the word, if you cut me in.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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"It was shocking!" Baby, it always is.
"He shoulda listened" But you're so boringly nagging. Don't blame him.
"I left the cooler on top of the dryer and ran it." Which 'it', the cooler or the dryer? Yes, there are electric coolers, if you must know.
But why was he a 'bad boy'? Yes, you've told him about your electrical issues, but YOU put the running cooler/dryer on--YOU! That insurance company should investigate--long and hard!
Mom's the word, if you cut me in.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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You were talking about long and hard and I got distracted. I know there are electric coolers Mr. Smarty pants I have one. It was given to me, and it plugs into the car! Kinda nifty. I can cry on cue, bring on the investigaters, I will be so slow and decrepit they will offer to pay me twice! No money for you. But you can send me your wife's email and I can give her some tips on how to get rid of a nasty stain....... Karen
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
So you left the cooler in a place where you knew he would go and would ultimately get zapped? Who's the bad one here?
You seem to write about men who meet their maker while with you. Get many dates, Karen, lol?
I hope your damsel in distress got a big settlement from the insurance company:-)
xo
Pam
P.S. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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So you left the cooler in a place where you knew he would go and would ultimately get zapped? Who's the bad one here?
You seem to write about men who meet their maker while with you. Get many dates, Karen, lol?
I hope your damsel in distress got a big settlement from the insurance company:-)
xo
Pam
P.S. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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I am a lady so I pick on the men the most. I haven't good luck with them. I don't like many anymore. They still hit on me even in my current decrepit state. Which just proves they are insane.
Killing off men helps me tamp down my pain, and I do it legally. When I wrote Lorelein It lasted several days. And by the way, in "The Elevator" I killed off a woman! :-)
Comment from jim vecchio
Such a sad story! Next time try for more humor! ONLY KIDDING!!! This was an unusual and worthy candidate for the 75 word contest. Nice to read your writing again!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Such a sad story! Next time try for more humor! ONLY KIDDING!!! This was an unusual and worthy candidate for the 75 word contest. Nice to read your writing again!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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I wrote you in regular email about an idea I have. Thanks for the read. Karen
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Thanks. I'll check my e-mail right now!
