Comment from joann r romei

Exceptional

This was hilarious, what a fun little story, and perfect for the contest, I laughed so hard, and could envision the scene, no errors noted and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Brandi,
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
This is a cute poem about how easy it is to misunderstand toddler who are just learning to talk. It is good that she used her hands to show you what she meant.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

I already gave away my last six. We have a lot of good writers here. You deserve one, but alas the cup is empty. The " I felt like such a boob" clinched it.
Good work. Karen

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a laughter Flash contest entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2024

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Oh, you really set us up perfectly for that punch line. I thought your daughter was a pre-teen just entering puberty.
What is more important, you made me laugh. This entry should do well in the contest. Rod

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2024