Opposites and Temptation
What was the purpose of...6 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
I was profoundly pleased with your last review. You called me friend of which I am. I am also a fan of your unique and interesting viewpoint writing. You are a fascinating man.
By the way, this is a great example of your talents.
Thank you. D
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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I was profoundly pleased with your last review. You called me friend of which I am. I am also a fan of your unique and interesting viewpoint writing. You are a fascinating man.
By the way, this is a great example of your talents.
Thank you. D
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thanks and thanks, once more.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Your mind is interesting. I don't follow the same train of thought you do though. My brain is tired. I go Saturday to Houston to pick up the rest of my stuff.
Then I bring it here, and I can properly nest. Unpacking and organizing and settling down. I am happy to be here.Nice writing. Karen
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Your mind is interesting. I don't follow the same train of thought you do though. My brain is tired. I go Saturday to Houston to pick up the rest of my stuff.
Then I bring it here, and I can properly nest. Unpacking and organizing and settling down. I am happy to be here.Nice writing. Karen
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Interesting? Ok. I agree for why else would I find repeat reviewers
Have you ever read my profile written two yrs ago?
Might I have been right?
You are a delight.
Comment from Julie G1
So well written. This brief tale takes an old standard with a comical approach, very appealing. The language selected is apt, building an appropriate word picture, leading to the pithy conclusion. Overall, worked well for this reader.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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So well written. This brief tale takes an old standard with a comical approach, very appealing. The language selected is apt, building an appropriate word picture, leading to the pithy conclusion. Overall, worked well for this reader.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Pithy... yes. Thanks for your review. You get a nomination for your thoughtfulness.
Comment from Julie Helms
I wouldn't say Eve was the forbidden fruit because God told them to get busy and make Us. She was an unwrapped gifted fruit Lol. A fun and thought-provoking dribble!
Julie
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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I wouldn't say Eve was the forbidden fruit because God told them to get busy and make Us. She was an unwrapped gifted fruit Lol. A fun and thought-provoking dribble!
Julie
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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I seemingly cannot satisfy the program even thought I have retorted to your review with a comment, that if it wasn't for Eve none of us would be here.
Comment from royowen
Adam and Eve were married, because God gave Eve to Adam and said go forth and multiply,, and they it was the eating of the fruit that was forbidden, they disobeyed, but great writing, well done, good luck blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Adam and Eve were married, because God gave Eve to Adam and said go forth and multiply,, and they it was the eating of the fruit that was forbidden, they disobeyed, but great writing, well done, good luck blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you
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Welcome
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love your reimagining of the Adam and Eve's story. I love how you described the "two-step"! haha. This is an enjoyable poem. I think you've found what made life interesting for them. :) Great job!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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I love your reimagining of the Adam and Eve's story. I love how you described the "two-step"! haha. This is an enjoyable poem. I think you've found what made life interesting for them. :) Great job!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you. I was hoping it would be as enjoyable a read as it was to write.