Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is wonderful and funny. I love your playful rhymes and the dark humor! Your writing has such a unique voice that is both eerie and captivating. You've got a knack for blending the chilling with the charming!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024

---

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024

Thank you so much Michael, your review is very encouraging:)

Comment from Lindsey Russell

Excellent

Good job with this story. It's very cute. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. Good luck with your writing endeavors. Best wishes!!! I hope to read more from you.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2024

---

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024

Hi Lindsey thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review:)

Comment from Julie G1

Excellent

So well composed. This tale presents a great response to the prompt, apt and witty. Overall, worked well and comically for this reader. Do not be discouraged, all you chicks!

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2024

---

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024

Hi Julie, thank you so much for the witty review.