Unfinished Brushstrokes
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Comment from Julie Helms
He was sure he could get the judge to see his side of the story. If not --" He shook his head. "He'll be the one jumping through hoops, not me.
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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He was sure he could get the judge to see his side of the story. If not --" He shook his head. "He'll be the one jumping through hoops, not me.
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Great catch! Like I said, you are an eagle eye!
Thanks, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I can't believe how detailed this story is. I don't remember Poppa, but I surely remember Tango, who was always a phenomenal back up to Garth. All of the characters intertwine. I'm thinking of the Judge. You have made the experience of reading this novel a lot of fun. I just sit back, read, and ride on your roller coaster.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I can't believe how detailed this story is. I don't remember Poppa, but I surely remember Tango, who was always a phenomenal back up to Garth. All of the characters intertwine. I'm thinking of the Judge. You have made the experience of reading this novel a lot of fun. I just sit back, read, and ride on your roller coaster.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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thanks so much Lorraine. Tango was always top dog over Poppa. Poppa is usually just a back up. Thank youso much for your kind words and support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I hope they will keep something closer than a phone if I'm needing backup. Now I'm trying to stop adding those silly LOLs, like laughing at my own comments. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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I hope they will keep something closer than a phone if I'm needing backup. Now I'm trying to stop adding those silly LOLs, like laughing at my own comments. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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LOL as much as you like. I like yur crazy jokes and your slippery thoughts. Better you laugh at your jokes than laugh at me. LOL Sorry I couldn't resist.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from tfawcus
Slick, believable dialogue and some fast-paced action. That judge sounds like a crock full of s...
I like the way you show both sides of addiction (just lost souls needing guidance, etc) Are you following Jim Wile's story? It's good.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Slick, believable dialogue and some fast-paced action. That judge sounds like a crock full of s...
I like the way you show both sides of addiction (just lost souls needing guidance, etc) Are you following Jim Wile's story? It's good.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024
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Thanks for your kind comments and for reading my story. I do so appreciate it. I know it takes up a lot of valuable time.
I've not seen Jim's story. Thanks for the tip and I will try my best to check it out.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a really good chapter to the book. Eleanor doesn't have much luck with straightening out Trevor. Woodman's assistants find out that the judge is seeing Eleanor's sister. And someone gave the judge a painting. One of Eleanor's? Very complex plot to make a great story.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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This is a really good chapter to the book. Eleanor doesn't have much luck with straightening out Trevor. Woodman's assistants find out that the judge is seeing Eleanor's sister. And someone gave the judge a painting. One of Eleanor's? Very complex plot to make a great story.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Lots of twists and turns...even I wonder sometimes why I do this to myself. But it's fun and makes a story much more interesting I think. Thanks for the comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Clever work done here. They talk too much and assume noone else can hear. A pity Trevor has not paid any attention to Eleanor; he would have done better to listen to her - but it sounds like he has some dirt on the judge. Another super chapter. I am enjoying this one a lot.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Clever work done here. They talk too much and assume noone else can hear. A pity Trevor has not paid any attention to Eleanor; he would have done better to listen to her - but it sounds like he has some dirt on the judge. Another super chapter. I am enjoying this one a lot.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Yes, Trevor thinks he has the upper hand but it might explode in his face.... and maybe the judge's too! thanks so much for the review and comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Trevor seems to be blinded by his addiction. Even a ghost couldn't snap him out of it. I'm guessing the crooked judge is the one that will sentence Trevor so I wonder what plan that Trevor has.
Hooray for Tango getting that critical information!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Trevor seems to be blinded by his addiction. Even a ghost couldn't snap him out of it. I'm guessing the crooked judge is the one that will sentence Trevor so I wonder what plan that Trevor has.
Hooray for Tango getting that critical information!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Trevor, in his mixed up brain, believes he can blackmail the judge and get off scot free... His plan may get him out of jail, but the consequences might me more than he's prepare to face.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is another excellent chapter. Your story is full of action with enough dialogue to carry the story forward in a well-paced manner. Keep writing, and I will keep reading.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. Your story is full of action with enough dialogue to carry the story forward in a well-paced manner. Keep writing, and I will keep reading.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank yu as always, April. There's a bit of fireworks on many sides in the next chapter.... Can't wait to hear what you think.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
So the Judge is involved in the stolen art work. Ther are replacing it with counterfit. The Eleanot scared her nephew but he'll talk himself into believing he was just seeing things.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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So the Judge is involved in the stolen art work. Ther are replacing it with counterfit. The Eleanot scared her nephew but he'll talk himself into believing he was just seeing things.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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For now, Trevor thinks he's entitled and the drugs give him a sense of importance...but when they are gone... I guess we wait and see.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
I think one has to feel sorry for Trevor, he seems to be in a pickle he's not really going to solve as he thinks he is, but then desperate people...how interesting that Eleanor turned up in his cell, but she's still compassionate and humam well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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I think one has to feel sorry for Trevor, he seems to be in a pickle he's not really going to solve as he thinks he is, but then desperate people...how interesting that Eleanor turned up in his cell, but she's still compassionate and humam well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Yes, Trevor was a spoiled over-priviledge young man and still believes he can manipulate others for what he wants. He's about to learn that life has consequences.
Smiles, Carol
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Yep, I believe that