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Oneness With Her

One's soulmate

3 total reviews 
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Tempests,
This is such a beautiful poem full of passion and hope.

I like that her sweetness, made a bitter man able to love again.

It really is a very beautiful poem.

The photo nicely complements your words.
Best wishes to you,
Cindy

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
    Thank you for the lovely review.

    Glad you enjoyed reading my wee poem.

    I took some time to find that picture , I wanted it to express her sweetness.

    PS: I love your avatar 🐾

    Keep safe ! 🍀
Comment from Kelly Louisa Balliu
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This is lovely. It rhymes beautifully and the accompanying illustration speaks for itself. By summing this character's feelings up in only six lines, their depth of feeling couldn't be any clearer; in this case, the influence of love in turning one's life around. Enough said.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
    Yes, love can heal. Sadly there is not enough of it.

    Thank you for the kind and insightful comments.

    Glad you enjoyed the read! 🙂
Comment from Bill Schott
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This six-line poem, Oneness with Her, has the proper formatting and finds that the woman has the "nesses" for everything desired in this relationship.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
    The most important
    " ness" being her love/sweetness🙂.

    Love heals hearts.

    Thank you for reading and posting a review!