2024 Gypsy's Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "a Way Out of Hell".
9 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine write, Gypsy, and thank goodness you found the help you needed and leaned on it to help you out of the dark place you were in. And, realizing you needed that help
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Another fine write, Gypsy, and thank goodness you found the help you needed and leaned on it to help you out of the dark place you were in. And, realizing you needed that help
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate it.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
There are a few studies out there that says many Americans are only one paycheck away from being homeless. That's scary. I am sure as Americans we can do more to help these people. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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There are a few studies out there that says many Americans are only one paycheck away from being homeless. That's scary. I am sure as Americans we can do more to help these people. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional five stars review and kind words,
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
yea, and most of the homeless are here in california lol
nice ending of hope with serenity, courage, and wisdom between the lines...
good flash with a strong message
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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yea, and most of the homeless are here in california lol
nice ending of hope with serenity, courage, and wisdom between the lines...
good flash with a strong message
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Yes, we have a lot of homeless people in Los Angeles.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rachelle Allen
In my opinion, social workers are the angels who walk among us. Thank you for this impactful social statement in the form of a flash fiction story. It is a memorable start to my day. Thank you for making me more aware. xoxo
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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In my opinion, social workers are the angels who walk among us. Thank you for this impactful social statement in the form of a flash fiction story. It is a memorable start to my day. Thank you for making me more aware. xoxo
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Always my pleasure!! xoxo
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Thank goodness, this is only fiction! But you bring a shocking global problem of homelessness and destitution vividly to life in this stirring flash fiction. Well done and good luck, Gypsy! Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank goodness, this is only fiction! But you bring a shocking global problem of homelessness and destitution vividly to life in this stirring flash fiction. Well done and good luck, Gypsy! Debbie
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
It's a sad story that too many - even one is too many - suffer! I'm glad you were able to help some of the people who were in such dire circumstances. Great job with your 80 word flash! Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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It's a sad story that too many - even one is too many - suffer! I'm glad you were able to help some of the people who were in such dire circumstances. Great job with your 80 word flash! Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm trying to work on my writing prose.
Love,
Gypsy
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I'm proud of you! Keep it up!
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Thank you 🤭
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a very serious crisis that is taking place in our country. Thank you for at least shining the light on it.
Your post is spaced out quite a lot. Sometimes this happens after pasting. It can be annoying, butcyou should look into correcting it.
This could be a strong entry for this 80 word FF contest.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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This is a very serious crisis that is taking place in our country. Thank you for at least shining the light on it.
Your post is spaced out quite a lot. Sometimes this happens after pasting. It can be annoying, butcyou should look into correcting it.
This could be a strong entry for this 80 word FF contest.
RJ
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and helpful feedback. I changed it to left alignment, it looks fine on my end.
Gypsy
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You're welcome
Comment from royowen
I'm so sorry you experienced that, but I experienced other things, but you're in a better place now, and were always meant to be there, The Lord needs your function, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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I'm so sorry you experienced that, but I experienced other things, but you're in a better place now, and were always meant to be there, The Lord needs your function, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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No, it's not about me, it's fictional.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Oh ok, silly me
Comment from GWHARGIS
All it takes sometimes is a few missed payments and you can wind up homeless. This was a moving short piece of fiction. Homelessness is a real and stark lesson in survival. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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All it takes sometimes is a few missed payments and you can wind up homeless. This was a moving short piece of fiction. Homelessness is a real and stark lesson in survival. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Yes, Gretchen, we have a lot of homeless people in Los Angeles. It's very sad. I was a social services worker for homeless for three years. It was hard but very rewarding.
Thank you!
Gypsy hugs