He Will Hold Me Up
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was beautiful and so well written. The progression from the pains of a broken heart to showing us how the Lord's blessing helped is so moving. Your words show us your resilience when anchored in faith.
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I thought this was beautiful and so well written. The progression from the pains of a broken heart to showing us how the Lord's blessing helped is so moving. Your words show us your resilience when anchored in faith.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Here is the definition of feigns
appearance of : induce as a false impression. feign death. b. : to assert as if true : pretend. Is that what you meant here? Maybe it is. But I had to ask
"Satan's lie feigns
When weakness gains"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Here is the definition of feigns
appearance of : induce as a false impression. feign death. b. : to assert as if true : pretend. Is that what you meant here? Maybe it is. But I had to ask
"Satan's lie feigns
When weakness gains"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024