Love Nest
Built for a lifetime17 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Ginda,
This is a very romantic love poem using a strong extended metaphor. Sounds like a slow growing and strong lasting relationship.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Hi Ginda,
This is a very romantic love poem using a strong extended metaphor. Sounds like a slow growing and strong lasting relationship.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Joan,
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No problem, Ginda.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this perfect love in this contest entry with us. I enjoyed the metaphor for the bird building the nest, protecting their young, and allowing them to fly away. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing this perfect love in this contest entry with us. I enjoyed the metaphor for the bird building the nest, protecting their young, and allowing them to fly away. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, for your kind words and good wishes.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a beatuiful love poem. I love how you have wrapped in the images of bird building a nest and providing for the young. All the things you describe is what any woman would want in her life. How could she no loove him.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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This is a beatuiful love poem. I love how you have wrapped in the images of bird building a nest and providing for the young. All the things you describe is what any woman would want in her life. How could she no loove him.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Beth.
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a creative take on the "love poem" prompt for the contest. I especially loved how you capped it off with that last line. It was perfect. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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I think this was a creative take on the "love poem" prompt for the contest. I especially loved how you capped it off with that last line. It was perfect. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Jessi.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Interesting choice of subject. Very nicely done. Were you being birdbrained? hahaha Seriously the picture and everything are well matched. You did well. Karen
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Interesting choice of subject. Very nicely done. Were you being birdbrained? hahaha Seriously the picture and everything are well matched. You did well. Karen
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Karen.
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:-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the loving sentiment here and birds are so tenacious in their duty to nurture their chicks and they are a joy to watch, much enjoyed Ginda, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed the loving sentiment here and birds are so tenacious in their duty to nurture their chicks and they are a joy to watch, much enjoyed Ginda, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Dolly. Have a great day.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Very sweet and romantic and full of life's understandings that build a foundation and grow a life together. Adorable picture to accompany these warm and delightful words. Best of luck to you in the Love Poetry contest!! xoxo
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Very sweet and romantic and full of life's understandings that build a foundation and grow a life together. Adorable picture to accompany these warm and delightful words. Best of luck to you in the Love Poetry contest!! xoxo
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Rachelle, for your sweet review.
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My pleasure!! xo
Comment from gansach
This is a beautiful entry for the Love Poem Poetry competition. I love the comparison with a bird building a nest for his mate and family-to-be, the words are so tender and loving, great presentation. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This is a beautiful entry for the Love Poem Poetry competition. I love the comparison with a bird building a nest for his mate and family-to-be, the words are so tender and loving, great presentation. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from lyenochka
This is a beautiful love poem! There is such tenderness and the narrator shows us how her husband has provided the perfect, safe, and loving home "in the space beneath her heart." Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This is a beautiful love poem! There is such tenderness and the narrator shows us how her husband has provided the perfect, safe, and loving home "in the space beneath her heart." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Helen, I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry contest. I have always loved the term "nesting" for what new wives and soon-to-be-mothers do and you took it even further. It is a poem about real love and not just a romantic love poem. nicely done.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry contest. I have always loved the term "nesting" for what new wives and soon-to-be-mothers do and you took it even further. It is a poem about real love and not just a romantic love poem. nicely done.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Marilyn, for such great comments.