The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Reunion and Goodbyes Pt2"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This chapter of your story beautifully shows the emotional depth of your characters. The interactions with the nuns and the children and the visit with Becky really stood out to me. It's clear how much thought and care you've put into your characters' development and their interconnected stories. And it's coming along so well and is so enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This chapter of your story beautifully shows the emotional depth of your characters. The interactions with the nuns and the children and the visit with Becky really stood out to me. It's clear how much thought and care you've put into your characters' development and their interconnected stories. And it's coming along so well and is so enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I really appreciate your comments and I'm glad you're enjoying the ride! :)
Comment from jim vecchio
It was very wise to divide these two chapters. Both were an ides length. I wonder if we'll her form Becky again. Thanks to your writing, we've been told a bit more about the backstory.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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It was very wise to divide these two chapters. Both were an ides length. I wonder if we'll her form Becky again. Thanks to your writing, we've been told a bit more about the backstory.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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I don't know. She wasn't planned, I wrote it spur of the moment. I kind of just let it flow
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I have to apologize for my typos in my brief former reply. I have trouble with the fingers of my left hand sometimes.