Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
I like that this is mono-rhyme. The words describe the artwork well.
Nature has many dangers in it.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day,
Joan

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024

Thank you, Joan.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Tsunami, has the proper formatting and can only be witnessed successfully on film from far away, as most all things and people in the area will likely disappear.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024

Thank you.

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

This is a great poem for the 3-5-3 prompt, it's got words chosen very carefully to depict the power of a tsunami and I think you have done this really well. Good luck with the competition

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024

Thanks, Nicki.