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Fall Is Here

contest entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi
This short poem tells what causes allergies and the body's response to them. Allergies seem to happen in all seasons except Winter. That is unless you have indoor allergies with your outdoor ones.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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It worked this time. It is a shame no one alerted you before. You would have stood a good chance of winning in my opinion. I use the spell and grammar check in Word, and also Grammarly. And if anything slips through, I have friends who rush to tell me.
Karen

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you for the help. I searched the dictionary for the right spelling and had no luck. With your help I have now gone back and corrected it.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 09-Jul-2024
    I still show it unchanged.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    That's odd, Maybe I didn't hit the save button. "If at first you don't succeed" -- I hope I got it right this try.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 10-Jul-2024
    I updated your review. Good luck. Karen
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I enjoyed this! Your poem captures the essence of autumn with a touch of humor! I loved your poem and the image that you shared with it. "Gazuntite" adds a playful touch! Your poem is so charming.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Thank goodness this is just fiction because as much as I love Fall, I am not ready for it to come around again just yet. you entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt is cute and I like the cartoon you added to the presentation.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you. Fall is still a ways off, and in real life it's my favorite season, but I was in the mood for some silliness when I wrote this one.