Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Lovely image and nice presentation, Harry.
-I can see why you won the contest.
-Effective opening line with good alliteration.
-Good use of personification in line two.
-A very good closing line.
-You create a vivid word picture
showing joy in nature.
-Congratulations on your special
honor for July's recognized writer.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for the feedback and the congrats. It was a complete surprise and a wonderful honor.

reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Jul-2024

You are very welcome. It is a wonderful honor.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
This is a good mix of words and artwork. The words give three beautiful parts of Spring.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024

Thanks for read and feedback. Stay safe, have fun.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a lovely poem for the "nature 3-5-3" writing prompt. You used great descriptions and personifications. You also got the syllable counts right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024

Thanks for read and reply. Appreciated.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your haiku beautifully captures the beauty of nature. The imagery of winds whispering, leaves dancing in sunlight, and a bird singing bring a feeling of peace. It's a wonderful to read your poem about this tranquil moment. Great job!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024

Thanks for the read and the encouraging review. Appreciated.